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| "The Fire" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: kakashifangirl_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 16:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was super cute ^^ Great job...that actually would have been a good episode, if it was longer of course ^^ good job!
| Reviewed By: Whatsername [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 04:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there. I like your one-shot. The storyline isn't the most creative I've ever read, but I like your way of writing. Some parts of this story was very beautiful, like the one with the fire he thought he'd lost and so on.. Anyways, I like it. I fyou like KaixOC fics, maybe you could check out my storys, then I'd be glad :)
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