| "Avalanche - White Danger" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Gryphon's wing On: February 02, 2004 08:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is absolutely great, but I don't see any new chapters. Come on, please don't leave us in suspense.
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Title: THANK YOU
Reviewed By: HyperMan On: December 31, 2003 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really know how to pull at the strings of the heart you evil person you. I was suffering right along with everyone else and you really presented Davis in a whole new way. You say you aren't good at romance fics, but your a master with angst. All things considering, it was appropriate to leave out the romance stuff (With the exception of Kenyako.) You can put it all in another chapter. You kick ASS! Post more soon.
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Title: Avalanche
Reviewed By: Daikari4eva On: December 14, 2003 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A big fat ten for everything. I'm literally in tears. I love Daikari and Davis is my fave. Please put them together. Dai deserves happiness. I love it, love it, love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: L33tfic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 07:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn it! you and your stinkin 2b continueds. finish the last chapter SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Star Katt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 10:51 CST
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I LUVED IT!!!! IT ROX!! :-D Its ok, u don't have 2 write n-e romance. Just Davis waking up was good e-nuf 4 me. Yea!!!! Just, don't make me wait a year 4 the epilouge. ^_^ L8r g8r
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Reviewed By: Star Katt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 22:25 CST
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STUPID, U MADE ME CRY & U PROBABLY AREN'T EVEN GOING 2 FINISH THE STORY!!!! *sobs & crys* I just want 2 read the rest, please don't let Davis die, it wud just b 2 sad. I like Davis, there r times when I just want 2 hug him. Please finish the story, u got me n2 a very depressed mood. L8r. :'( Bye *goes back 2 her depressed crying*
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Reviewed By: CHILD_DRAGON On: May 16, 2003 06:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
nevermind just have kenyako,daikari,koumi & taiora |
Reviewed By: CHILD_DRAGON On: May 12, 2003 03:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE POST YOUR NEXT CHAPTERS PLEASE!!I ONLY LIKE DAIKARI KOUMIMI DAILEI & TAIORA |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 05:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats soooo sad.....but out of all the stories u'v wrote so far I think this one is my favourite. U really let people see the Davis inside...scared and lonely |
Reviewed By: Kitty-Ichijouji [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 02:08 CST
Comment/Review:
That's sooooo sad... *sob* |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its very good. Plzzz continue. I have 2 know what happens 2 my Dai-chan. I just luv him 2 itty bitty pieces |
Reviewed By: Dukect On: November 30, 2002 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is great story please contune |
Reviewed By: Mastero [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2002 04:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Good fic, you got everyone in charactor. |
Reviewed By: Q22 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2002 17:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
get working! |
Reviewed By: Q22 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2002 17:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
get working! |
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