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| "Can You Feel It, Too?" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: I lovetyka On: March 22, 2007 04:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE now. We are waiting since... forever.
| Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 06:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh wow ^^ that was most fun to read ^^ I liked the words you chose, and the small spots of cute information such as the small items that seemed out of place in .... that one room *has a bad memory*. I also liked how you added small blurbs of commentary sorts of things ^^ The story itself is cute too, though there may be a few grammatical errors (depending on where you're from....). I do hope that you plan to continue this or something.... if you don't... I'll be ... sad :( Over all a very nice job on this ^^ it doesn't move too fast or too slow and it's interesting ^^ though.... you could add in a ~*~ or what ever you broke lines with between their "let's have a re-match" and "wow kai.... you've gotten better"... ^^;
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