Reviewed By: Pat811 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was good, and somethig new (at least to me) when dealing with Fuji, Tezuka and Taka-san. But, in my opinion, his could turn into an interesting fic if you put more thought into the plot. Not necessarily a long Fic, but it just seems to me that this one-shot has some potential if the author puts some thought into it ^_^!!!!!!!!!
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