| "Love: Difficult to Precieve" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Vampire Kitty On: November 01, 2009 03:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't care what anyone else thinks, I think this story rocks!!! Please write more I want too see what Phantom will do now that he has "his Danny locked in the bathroom and in a lip-lock!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Stephanie_The_Idiot [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 10:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked the last scene it was really cute!! =]
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Reviewed By: Kimmiko16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 18:46 CST
Comment/Review:
I really liked this! Both chapters were amazing! I can't wait to see what happens between Phantom and Danny!
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Reviewed By: tenshi666 On: January 18, 2007 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
BULLSHIT
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Reviewed By: sailorunicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 23:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooh! cant wait for more! keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Daisuke14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 15:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
AWESOME!!! You have to write more. I was so frustrated with it since Phantom never actually got to make a move until the end, but then I couldn't stop reading!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: kairi-dell
Reviewed By: Kairi-dell [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fanfiction. Not many people would go for a gay or yaoi fanfic, it's really good because the last one I read like this Phamton was kind of shy and that story didn't have the rigth feel to it. But anyway I laughed alot it was funny as all get out and it was really cute. I mean come on Phamton went staight at Danny and didn't back down, which was awsome. I think you really did a good job and keep typing this stroy. Please don't give up on a good story to soon maybe if you write a few more chapters you'll get few or more reviews. But this is only my suguestion. So if you would please coutine this story I enjoy it.
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