| "A Strange New World" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
Reviewed By: Mariko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the Gaara/Lee pairing! So cute! My brain explodes every time I try picture them kissing...good job! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: kit-kit12 On: November 26, 2006 10:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i love the orachmaru/kurama pairing i didn't think i would though. i don't have a request for a one-shot but i do have a request for you. i was wondering if you could start up on your fan-fics all four boys in an all girls boarding school and eternal life. i love those two stories and i would hate for you to not finish them.
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Reviewed By: Crazed One On: November 24, 2006 00:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The chapter where Yuske's boss shows up in the hidden leaf village was great! You know how to write one hell of a story!
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Reviewed By: lijana On: November 23, 2006 14:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic has started off very well. ^__^ I like the idea and you have done a good job of setting the back story and the charcter interaction. My only critique is that you have made the Naruto characters too polite (I don't think I ever saw Kakashi bow to anyone, he is way too laid back for that) Other than that I look forward to this fic and will think of it as slightly OOC
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Reviewed By: kit-kit12 On: November 20, 2006 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow another great chapter i love the new caracter and the prohecy.
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf88 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 07:45 CST
Comment/Review:
i LIKE IT. just one thing, why did you have kurama give himself to the slimy bastard
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Reviewed By: kit-kit12 On: November 15, 2006 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i loved this chapter even if im not into the thought of orochamaru and kurama togerther
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Reviewed By: kit-kit12 On: November 13, 2006 07:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the chapter i wish kurama could come back and be friends with the gang but i know its not really possible.
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Reviewed By: Blue eyed death On: November 06, 2006 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please contiue with your story!
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Reviewed By: Crazed One On: November 05, 2006 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for puting in the chapter with Rock Lee and Garra! Thanks for updating.
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Reviewed By: Crazed One On: October 26, 2006 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for updating!
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Reviewed By: Crazed One On: October 22, 2006 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story and i would like it if you continued writing. Please don't put in the Kurma Orochinaru pairing. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 21:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
HAhaha I love it! It's funny that Yusuke lost because of the force Sakura put into throwing her shoes
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Reviewed By: kit-kit12 On: September 23, 2006 13:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another wonderful chapter i love that the kyubi and naruto are going to become closer and i see kankshi and iruka are making some head way.
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Reviewed By: kit-kit12 On: September 19, 2006 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i loved this chapter kankshi and iruka getting close and koenma t.v block had me laughing. i can't wait for your next chapter
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Title: here's to a happy writer...
Reviewed By: TearfulInsanity [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a great fic! i figured it would be weird when I saw it was a naruto/yyh, but it turns out it's really good! the only thing that sometimes gets me is that I would have thought that Kurama would be good in te field, but even that is fine as you work around it beautifully! keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: kit-kit12 On: September 13, 2006 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the chapter though im surprise koenma hasn't notice his team is gone..unless ofcourse this was setup by koenma so that they could learn more techiques.
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