| "Ranma's Morning Confession" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Sakura2838 On: January 26, 2007 14:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this, could you put up the rest o f the story soon??/ I really like how he talked to Akane's mother, and I would like to know how Ranma would react when he found out Akane knows. I really enjpyed it.
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Reviewed By: AMWOOD co [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 04:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First, I've read the whole thing (see FF.net everyone). You should finish it here. A quick note on the ratings: I've seen very few 10's for spelling and grammar. Your's is well written with the occasional error and so is far above par. "There is nothing new under the sun". This is becoming especially true with Ranma non-crossover fics. Yet this is an excellent spin on an old idea. Wonderful. Your's is one of the stories I enjoy so much that I have read it 3 times. I think of the several dozen I've read less than 10 have that. *SPOILER ALERT* What a wonderful read. Though I must confess that I'm kind of hoping for a sequel. How far do the side effects of the various potions go? How did Nabiki and Konatsu become a couple (other than a convenient business arrangement)? I hope to see more of your stuff. From the offices of AMWOOD co
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Reviewed By: black_talisman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 09:22 CST
Comment/Review:
You should definetely continue with this story! it sounds very interesting and I can't wait for Akana to confront Ranma... so, continue! ;-)
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