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"Revenge and The pit of Despair" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]
 Reviewed By: numnumz_ella  On: December 03, 2006 15:02 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
the reason why my rating is like this is that some of the words in your fanfic are not in their correct spelling and sometimes the grammar is wrong but it is ok, i did enjoy the stories. I suggest that you have the wedding of Hao and Scarlet in chapter 8 or 7 or 9 and the outcome of the fight with the father, whichever you want to end it. I didn't quite understand the part where Scarlet throws a fireball at her dad but it was stopped. Please explain this. Where is Anna anyway? Never mind that but continue this fanfic 'cause I hate reading unfinished stories. You're doing great.

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