Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 02:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
:D i like this story. not the best i've ever read, plot wise ^^; but hey, keep it up! btw, try to cut down on the excuse of chakra exhaustion... using it waay too much ^^; :) ja!
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