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"FAKE in Love: Act XX, Memories and Moments" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ]
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 Reviewed By: almne  On: September 23, 2006 22:26 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I love your writing style. The story flow similar to the actual manga. Darn that real life, getting in the way of writing fanfic!
 Reviewed By: Is O Eirinn Me [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 17, 2006 23:27 EDT
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OH MY GOD YOUR ALIVE!!!!!!! Im sooooo happy that you finaly updated. I about had a orgasm when i saw that you updated, I get really excited when you update. This story was AWESOME!!! i was a little confused in the beginning but I just loved the story. I didnt see the comment this Anon put up but they are totally wrong about whatever they said about you and they need to go play in traffic. Keep them coming, please dont wait us all wait three more months I think ill die if you do....lol j/k I just dont wanna wait till Christmas for another one. Keep up the awesome work we all love you!!!!!!
 Title: Storybook_Love
Reviewed By: Hana_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 17, 2006 21:23 EDT
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Okay, I don't know who this Anon person is, but they obviously insulted your series, and for that, I spit on them. Write more stories! Please? C'mon, you're the only one of the FAKE authors that still updates and isn't constantly filling every single moment of their stories with angst and depression....so you have to write more so I can read! And who IS this Anon person, anyway? WHAT DID YOU SAY TO OUR FAVORITE GRUMPY DEMON?!?
 Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 17, 2006 20:34 EDT
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I love it! Honestly, yours are among the very best Fake fanfics out there and I'm SO glad that you posted! Thanks for sharing!!
 Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (nli)  On: September 17, 2006 19:36 EDT
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... *blinks in shock* Who exactly is the Anon person? I mean really... *waves hands* Are they mentally unstable? I fail to understand how anyone could NOT like the Fake in Love series (saga). And it should have ended?? Nooooooo!!! I seriously think I'm going to cry when that day comes. You had me bouncing around the whole time, you've long ago polished all your elements to near perfection, and somehow you time it so right when my life seems to be hell incarnate, I come home and see that you've posted. And we all can appreciate the feeling of just being able to sink into a chair with a sigh and know that for a stretch of time we're going to transported to the world of our boys, with a fabulous author to take our minds off things. And now that I'm bringing that up, thank you. All of us (us being your fans) know these plot-lines just as well as the original ones, I'm sure many of us have re-read our favorite FIL Acts many times, and we're oh so gratefuly you keep them coming. Here's to hoping you never get bored with the boys!!
 Reviewed By: maylee80  On: September 17, 2006 18:16 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Another great Fake in Love fic! Thank you so much for writing this and your other chapters. You really have a knack for writing these guys. Again, great story and thanks for writing!
 Reviewed By: Aacire [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 17, 2006 12:10 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I was so excited when I saw that you had updated your story! This story was great! When I read the first chapter I thought that I had missed something in chapter 19! Anyway I really liked this one, I thought Ryo was going to jail for a second there. I did want to know what really happened in that warehouse though. The ending was great and I loved how some of Ryo remembered what Dee said in the video. That was really good. Till next time, Asta!
 Title: bluesnake40
Reviewed By: bluesnake40 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 17, 2006 09:57 EDT
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Yah, great job, hurray etc. WELCOME BACK ... am so glad to see you continuing with the series. You are one of my fave writers for FAKE. As usual, this one didn't fail to entertain. The opening para had me biting my nails and it was an absolute cliff hanger with tension running high through most of the story. Also loved your humourous lines which made it a joy to read... the hot action between Dee/Ryo didn't hurt either. So they finally made a tape .... Can't wait to read your next fic.
 Reviewed By: SweetRinoa [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 17, 2006 03:43 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am so glad that you are still alive. Once again you have created a wonderful story. Don't listen to Anon, you are the reason that i have not given up on Fake Fanfictions. Keep them comming. :)
 Title: Oh, yesh...
Reviewed By: Narri Again  On: September 17, 2006 00:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
And Anon is insane-on. (Anon, cupcake-sweetiepie-lovedove? Get a CLUE. And taste in fanfics. I'll bet j00 like Kracken's monstrosity, don't you, my lovely child?) DON'T let tacky people get j00 down, Miss Grumpy Demon! FAKE In Love is the only thing that keeps me and quite a few others INTO FAKE fanfiction. Sherioushly, babe. *les massive huggle* ^0^ Kyeeeeee, write more soon! (xoxoxoxo)
 Title: Kyaaaaaah!
Reviewed By: Narri  On: September 17, 2006 00:31 EDT
Comment/Review:
WHOOO NOBODY'S DEAD!!!1!ONE!!11! ^0^ Awww, poooor Ryooo... ;_; Teh poor thing has gone through just so much emotional dung. I'm glad he got a semi-happy-ish-okay-sorta ending. ^^; And ooooohm'Gawd, I luff Dee! (Vhell, I already did, but...) He's just so shibby, with everything that happened. (And so in-character! Everybody was...woo-hoo, girl! ^.^) And teh video!!one! X3! BRILLIANT bit. Luffit. Ryo's soooo cute on film. I knew he'd get all flustered. (3 There's our bashful blushin' boy. (If j00're taking requests, I think these boys could use a break from all this drama! A little sex on the beach should hit the spot, and not the alchohol, if j00 know what I mean, and I think j00 do, hint hint, nudge nudge. ^.~) KYAAAAAAHHH, thank j00 for all this, Miss Grumpy Demon! Thank j00 for all j00 do for our boys! (And for this not-bad ending!) J00 are teh best FAKE author I'ff ever read! Much luuurrrrve, kittycat! Mmmm~wah! ^.^ *glomp*
 Title: FYI
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 16, 2006 23:47 EDT
Comment/Review:
Anon - Perhaps you've misread, but Grumpy Demon is one of the MOST popular FAKE writers out there. (Don't believe me - check the read count next to each of GD's stories.) It's OK if you didn't like this last particular story, but NO ONE does it better - And this is coming from someone who has read EVERY SINGLE PIECE of FAKE fanfiction out there. Again, it's OK not to like this particular story, but as UltraEra said, most FAKE fans ADORE GD's work. GD's writing speaks for itself. And if someone needs to apologize, it's not GD.
 Reviewed By: gretel_chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 16, 2006 22:48 EDT
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Wonderful work as always. I love this series, and how you've crafted this extension of the Fake universe. Good luck with the ongoing writing. Maybe I'll take you up on your challenge :).
 Reviewed By: UltraEra  On: September 16, 2006 22:27 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Anon, it's obvious that everybody does not agree with you. GrumpyDemon, this was wonderful as always. Keep up the amazing work.
 Reviewed By: Storybook_Love  On: September 16, 2006 18:29 EDT
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*glomps* You're ALIVE!!! I missed you! God, you've had me on pins and needles for ages.... I liked this story. It was a little more confusing than your other ones, but it all worked itself out in the end, so I was happy. Now I want more stories, though....
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