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"Neon Genesis Evangelion: Singularity" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: Helbaworshipper  On: September 19, 2006 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think that the fic is well written in the Evangalion storyline. However, there is only one problem I can truly stress to you. It seems a bit formulamatic, as if I'm just watching an alternate version of an Eva episode. The exceitment and enjoyment come from it having a take that puts someone into a newer episode without feeling deja vous. Your fic just needs more you in it.
 Reviewed By: djohnson [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 19, 2006 01:08 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very good start, you did a good job with making this seem like part of the Eva series. No one was significantly out of character, and your ACC seems pretty cool too. Can't wait for more.
 Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 18, 2006 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Not a bad start just don't make your ACC too knowledge and overshandowthe others characters. Married? Well I'm sure you have something on that we'll see soon! Asuka breaking down early? Nice change! dennisud

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