| "After a Midnight Meeting" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: nessanessa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 02:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story!!!
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Reviewed By: yer lil demon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 19:08 CDT
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*twitch*......hinata....um.....wow................O_O....why was hinata doing...um....well...u know..the last chapter?!?!?!?!?!?
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 18:45 CDT
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...good chapter, skipped over wat i was expecting, but still good. keep up the good work...Dragon_Lord
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 20:26 CDT
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hmm... i see, i see. i understand where u r going with this. then again, i understand more than people think. i am looking forward to wat happens next...Dragon_Lord
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Title: Nicely Done!
Reviewed By: Kingkakashi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A really nice Naruto-Hinata story. Well thought out and packed with lots of emotions. I'm very interested to see if you'll continue this story and where you'll take it? Keep up the great work
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: Bafamal [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 10:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story i always like NaruHina stories
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Title: Awww... ^_^
Reviewed By: Kiraichi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 04:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You finally updated! Woo! That was nice seeing the InoxChouji couple. I've never thought about that. But it makes some sense if you tilt your head a bit. ^^ Update soon. Romance!(solo tango dance) Cha cha!
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Title: -tears- This thing always makes me feel fuzzy.
Reviewed By: Kiraichi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 05:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You keep going like this and I'm gonna fuzz up like a fur ball. Awesome way to resolve the matter, and congrats on completing another chapter! We look forward to see more from you so please continue soon! I like the usage of Kurenai to help fix the situation. So cute, she was getting them together all over again. Hee ha.^_^
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Title: - brown eyes close...eyes open and show green eyes-
Reviewed By: Kiraichi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did not just do that! You did not just make me whimper in anxiousness, sweetness, anxiousness, then leave me at a cliffhanger!! >_< That's an angry smiley. You get back on your computer and continue writing, or so help me I will go cazy thinking about what might happen next! -whimper- Hinata stay true!!
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Reviewed By: drag0nsclaw [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 06:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry about the enjoyment reting but i just didn't like the last chapeter, it makes me feel like hinata's going to cheat on naruto. which is some thing he doesnt deserve. and i dont like reading about cheating, just never been comfortable with it. Other than that it was good ^_^
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Title: please continue
Reviewed By: drakmar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, you should continue this its good. It has alot of heart to it.
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Title: -tear, tear, tear- Beautiful...
Reviewed By: Kiraichi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can someone get me a tissue? -tissue comes out of nowhere- Thank you. T_T T_T That was beautiful!! The love, the passion, the fact that it was Hinata and Naruto! T_T Even Neji couldn't stop Hinata's love! Hyaah! That's what you get for hurting Hinata in the Chunnin Exams! CHA! Ha ha ha! Awsome work Hobbesthebrainslug, we salute you! -hearty salute- Oh and one more time sorry about the comments, I'm waiting for some of my own too. Speaking of which, I posted my own story! Please read and review. You'll like it. Look for the author Kiraichi.
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Title: Ill be watching*shifty eyes*
Reviewed By: DoggaNothlit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it it was great and ended fabously! too bad it had to end i started reading it and forgot what it was called took me forever to find it and im glad i did! ill be watching your stories!
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Title: thanks a whole lot!
Reviewed By: Hobbesthebrainslug [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 23:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
lol, dang i was hoping for a review from three separate people, ha-ha. but thanks for all the praise! i appreciate it! like i said, there IS a third part i'm working on, and it IS the last part. But it's not up to my standards in fanfic and writing in general. so it might be a little while before i reveal it. After that its on to my next project. Which i will definitely post if i'm allowed. It's a non-fanfic story, i'm not sure if those are allowed.
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Title: Ooops.
Reviewed By: Kiraichi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 09:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oops, sorry about the two comments. But I'm new at this, I didn't kow they worked. But they are both true nonetheless.
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