| "My mentally challenged cousin" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: SummerRose [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2012 23:51 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Update soon please |
Reviewed By: PLF94 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2010 21:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should definitely edit more. There are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes hanging around. But it's a pretty good story otherwise. I like the storyline, even though it's been done to dead. And I especially like the fact that Sesshoumaru isn't an evil bastard. It's always fun to have him act as an older brother figure. By the way, I vote for Kurama!
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Title: update soon!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: BloodForbiddenVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2008 16:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please add more soon fand please make it a sango/yusuke or hiei and kagome/kurama
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 03:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it- hope to see an update soon, as for pairings Hiei/Kag - San/Yus would prove interesting. Ja ne -Dusken_Dreamer53
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: knjj727 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 17:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woah this is so goood please up dte soon
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 19:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
awesome story , i like the idea of another jewel and it should definitely be a kagome x Kurama pairing.
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 10:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
wow another jewel of power
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 01:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOooooooooo I hope you update soon I love crossovers bettween YuYU HaKasho and Inuyasha.....and I hope this one will be Interesting.......XD....I like how shippo I like crazy energetic.....I supprized he isn't freaked out by all the stuff in the future......That was the best when you had that flash back on how Hiai and Kagome became friend that was the funniest thing....hehe.....well I hope you update this fic sometime in the nearest future
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 18:55 EDT
Comment/Review:
you really should continue this fic its really good and kagome and hiei should be put together either that or kag and kurama
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Title: My mentally challenged cousin
Reviewed By: isis_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 20:18 EST
Comment/Review:
kagome/kurama sango/hiei?
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Reviewed By: Hopelessly Hopefull [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 07:57 EST
Comment/Review:
gilarious so far and the title really reached out to me, please update soon! much love always hope xxx
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 10:53 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please update!I want to know what happens next.Plus i'm laughing at the comedy of the story so please update it soon.And to say I have the curiosity of a Kitsune,but great at waiting,but please hurry up,and update the story.
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Reviewed By: Mrs Kurama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 23:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
hEY COULD YOU CHECK OUT MINE IT'S CALLED "Good Bye and For Good" please check it out. ~_~
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Reviewed By: Mrs Kurama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 23:04 EDT
Comment/Review:
KAGOME KURAMA !!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT TO HELL! UPDATE BEFORE I FUCKIN KILL YOU BIT-!! Oops sorry abouth that. Please review. Oh and it really should be Kagome and Kurama because of Shippo.
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar09 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 19:50 EDT
Comment/Review:
OOOOOO MEH LIKES!! XD UPDATE SOON!! Kags- Kurama!! ^^ Maybe Hiei too OOO THREESOM!! I dont know I is confused!! Sango- MIROKU! XD ^^ CHEESE! I is hyper!! I want a cookie! DO you want a cookie? *runs off to get cookies* I HAVE A GEODUCK IN MY PANTS!! XD (not really) it this a wierd comment? I dont think it is but then again it might I dont know... You should have this lil paragragh in a chapter when one of the guys piss Kagome off " First We make all men reproduce A-sexually! Then we eat ther Livers and use there Testicles as party hats then we make them our slaves for all eternity and make them clean the house and do the dishes and eat the fungas off my grand mothers foot and deal with all the pain that we women have had to enduir for many a year by having a child! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! " yes Kagome should say that!! ^^ tis funny and it'll put any man/demon/thing in there place and make them behaive!! ^^ ok I leave for now!! BYES! Star!
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