| "Legend of Naruto" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Darth On: January 28, 2008 23:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
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Its a good story line but your grammer is really bad.
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Reviewed By: Wither [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good work, keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Train On: June 06, 2007 16:25 CDT
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The story is quiet good, but (don't be mad at be) it's so unrela. There ist somthing called a storrypool --> use it. Kyuubi is sitting there and reading a book or watching a video? Man this is a demon!!! Zabusa dies and give his sword to the man who killed him instead of his 'childs'?? The idea of the stroy of a nice childhood is good but it takes to many things away why Naruto is Naruto!!
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Reviewed By: Akira-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon please! ~Akira-sama~ Ja ne
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Reviewed By: RoseOfSand On: May 25, 2007 08:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
When is this going to be updated? I think you should update soon.
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Reviewed By: AtlantisWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 19:57 CDT
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Very nice thus far. One question though: What did Naruto mean that his parents were proud of not only him but of his sister? Isn't she only about 7 years old?
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Reviewed By: RoseOfSand On: April 20, 2007 23:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you going to update? I think you should update it soon I'm still wondering about what's going to happen.
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good. Keep updating, but check your grammar.
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Reviewed By: katanna On: November 28, 2006 15:34 CST
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also i no wat de riddle means but i won't tell for others who don't no lol losers X P me evil i no o o U
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Reviewed By: katanna On: November 28, 2006 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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this sounds ok so far and i no that your a alchimist fan too by when u said they'll be on an island untill they can figure out a saying cause there was a sho like that when they met mrs.teacher lady p.s. i'm very smart when it comes to anime
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 17:43 CST
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Well the story was ok but going t an island for 6 months you must have gotten that from Fullmetal Alchemist that and you won`t be updating for several weeks heck it was several weeks since ou first posted this story and now you repost it what are you going to repost it for the third time in several weeks oh well just update the story soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 10:03 CST
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I have a question well I haven`t read your story yet but I was wondering why did you repost this story and not update it with another chapter oh well its your story
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Reviewed By: johnathan ash On: November 17, 2006 12:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not good, not bad...
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Reviewed By: true killer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad but stop using the & and use and
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Reviewed By: Hybrid_FireLightning Creature [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 18:52 CDT
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This story is good one problem to me though. No offense but I don't see the need for the &'s instead of and's. Other than that this story is turning our really good.
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