| "Rack Up The Passion" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Demon of RHS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 19:23 CST
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I read the disclaimer thing and I meant that he seemed to shy to do anything of that particular sort (I read pre-revized edition that and Sy is high up on my fav character list) write how you like it was merely an opinion. Sorry if I ruined the chapter anyone who may be mad at me!
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Reviewed By: Demon of RHS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job. Though I still would of thought Sy would've been more responsible (It wasn't completely in his character to do what he did.) In an odd coincidence there is a Jasmine in my fic, but she is an OC (just so there is no confusion) Chazz is so cought up with himself that he carries condoms with him every where. Tsk tsk. Never the less awesome.
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Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: Bio Uotani [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 18:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fic! Nice job and nice ending!
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Title: Awesome job!
Reviewed By: Bio Uotani [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter! Really awesome job, I'm gonna be sorry when it ends ;_; oh well, I'll get over it. But really awesome job! I'm starting to feel alittle sorry for Chazz always getting the cold shoulder from Alexis. I guess I'll just have to fix that won't I ^_^ well anyway, can't wait for the next Chapter!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Bio Uotani [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter, can't wait for Chazz's. Though I'm still trying to figure out if he's straight. Anyway, keep writting!
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Reviewed By: Demon of RHS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 18:56 CST
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yeah finished it and it was GOOOOD! yeah all 5 girls wer on the pill. it's almost as if they saw it coming... dun dun dunnn... please add a new chapter I wanna hear Chazz's...just for the fact that it'll be a work of complete fiction(on Chazz's part i mean)
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Reviewed By: Demon of RHS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 18:45 CST
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pretty good, well writen but why is it All the girls (only first 2 chapters done) are on the pill I though Syrus was responsible *sobs alittle* Oh and Bastion is ignored in the series as a running joke just sayin'
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: Bio Uotani [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Get story! But you kindda write slow, no offense.But please hurry and write the next Chapter! Thanks ^_^
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Reviewed By: Riana-chan On: November 23, 2006 12:36 CST
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MM Yummy. Thankies for this.
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Reviewed By: triviatrap1982 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 06:06 CDT
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Wow, that's perfect! Now I'm waiting patiently for an Aster Phoenix scene.
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Reviewed By: DancingKirby [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 06:31 CDT
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Okay...that was a bit rushed, wasn't it? No buildup like in the last chapter. But it DOES have Bastion in it, so I guess I can't complain too much. P.S. Once again, I'm sorry for double-posting my last review.
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Reviewed By: kayla kaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 17:18 CDT
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its funny and a perfect sequal to your others kayla kaiba aka kk
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Reviewed By: Bio Uotani [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE! Write faster! I need to know what happens next! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! Awesome story by the way! ^_^
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Reviewed By: SetosLuver [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 21:37 CDT
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hiya it's Riana. Remember me? Would it possible for me to have a scene with Aster/Edo. Please for an old friend
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Reviewed By: DancingKirby [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
*is eagerly awaiting the Bastion part* In fact, I don't even really LIKE JadenxAlexis...I JUST WANT THE BASTION PART! The guy could use some more lemon scenes involving him, after all...he's so ignored most of the time.XD
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