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| "Melodramatic" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: restivesilence [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 05:45 CDT
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Beautiful job!!! I love it when I come across such a well written twin fic. Excellent.
| Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 08:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kawaii ^.^
| Reviewed By: chosuki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 14:55 CST
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AWE! I like it! You rarely get a twin oriented fic without it being twincest, (which I don't like) so I was quite pleasantly surprised to read this! I agree with the other people on your reviews, that this is an incredibly awesome, well written fic with no obvious mistakes(if any at all... Believe me, I'm miss grammar nazi) I could totally see it happening, and it's one of the better ouran fics I've read! nice job ^-^
| Title: FFRG Review
Reviewed By: Kari Izumi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 19:35 CDT
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I haven't read much fanfiction for this show, but I have to say this is easily one of the best potrayals of the Hitachiin twinsa I've come across. In Particular, Hikaru who, despite across as more of the seme in their pseudo twincestuous relationship on the show in indeed very emotionally needy and a bit selfish. Kaoru's thoughts about Hiraku were also very much in character. i also loved that line about their misconception of "commoners." That's very much a runing gag in the show about how completely wrong the concepts about non-rich people seem to be amoung Ouran students (well, with the Host Club members, anyway). Normally, I would leave a few suggestions to clean up the fic, but this is one of the rare fics where I couldn't see much room for improvement. It's pretty strongly written. Great job with this story, it was a joy to read. :)
| Reviewed By: Project 0506 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... I'm pretty new to Ouran but this really blew me away. It's amazing! Definitely going on the faves!
| Title: Nobody has reviewed this fic yet? The shame!!
Reviewed By: Val Kyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You put me to shame with your superior writing, although your punctuation is not as inaccurate or as interesting as mine. The portrayal of Kaoru is profound - you've really considered carefully the essence of his character and fleshed him out where the anime has been meagre. Kaoru is my favourite character, so I am glad you have done him justice or I would be less polite about this... The overall rating should really be 9.5 because that is probably statistically correct. However, I am fond of rounding up to the nearest whole number because I didn't do maths for nothing and I certainly didn't read your ifc for nothing, either. Your contribution to the fan-fic world for Ouran High School Host Club is outstanding. It is a shame your fic is too short and that I am too rubbish at doing one better.
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