| "Cabana Boy" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
Reviewed By: sprinklesheep [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2011 06:29 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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dear God, please update soon!!! its killing me!!!! and I suppose I should say thankyou for writing this. |
Reviewed By: PersianRurouni [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2010 22:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loooovveeddd it u finally got sano and meg together I thought it was a very appropriate timing...wasn't sure about sano sobbing so much but is understood. The dynamic of the whole group kills me and i'm peeling over laughing half the time!!! Great story and great new chapter thank you for updating and I am really really really looking forward to the next chapter. I need to know what happens....nowwwwwww :D thnx!
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Reviewed By: Annette On: February 24, 2010 23:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic. I am so glad you posted more chapters and I can't wait for the new chapter.
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Reviewed By: devilwoman On: September 16, 2009 06:04 EDT
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just wonder why the first part of all the sentences can't be seen. you may want to fix that bit up cause it is a bit hard to know whats going on if all the words cant be seen
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Reviewed By: kitty008 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 03:40 EDT
Comment/Review:
what, you're not gonna finish?
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Reviewed By: twstdmind On: June 29, 2007 23:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the originality of your idea in this story. It is AU, but I'm ok with that- sometimes those are the best stories! ...I'm sorta wondering though... Are you abandoning this project? For a while you updated so frequently, and now it's collecting e-dust. If you are abandoning this, would you please let us know?
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Title: Truly Amazing!
Reviewed By: Tender Ardor (didn't log in, I guess...oops!) On: May 28, 2007 05:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story with a passion! It is a true favorite of mine that I've been watching for quite some time...so I apologize for not reviewing your story until now. I love the flow of the plotline and the interaction with all the characters! You truly do a splendid job! Kudos! I love it and I hope you realizing how amazing this story is yourself! ~.^ I'm sure you do! Keep up the good work! You really have something amazing here!!!
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Reviewed By: Miharu Kawashi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 02:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed your story so far. I can't wait to see what Enishi will do next! I wonder when Kenshin will tell her his side of the story. Ja ne!
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Title: LOVE IT!
Reviewed By: Kaoru Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 18:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly loved the story. It was funny how Kaoru's dad knew that she and Kenshin were doing it under the same house he lived in. I loved the story from beginning to end. Especially when Kenshin returns to be with the love of his life.
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Title: Forget that last comment...
Reviewed By: Chi no Kaori [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 20:44 EDT
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Finally managed to read chapters 7 and 8. Still greatly enjoying the story. Kenshin and Kaoru's relationship is progressing almost maddeningly slowly, IMO, but that's not a bad thing - keeps me hooked ^_^.
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Title: Gomen...
Reviewed By: Chi no Kaori [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 09:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
Not really a review but...um, when I opened the Chapter page I found that the first few letters of every line got cut out somehow...must be my browser...I was wondering if you'd posted this somewhere else where I could read it? Sorry '^_^
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Title: Chapter 22
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 13:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GODS, OH MY KAMI-SAMA!!!! Upon discovering this story for the first time, I stayed up last night just to read all 22 chapters of this absolutely ENTHRALLING, FASCINATING work of art!!!! I read the few chapters here on MM.org and couldn't wait to read the rest... (Being an author, I love reading other author's notes. ;) Thanks for the tidbit on where to read the entire story!) You simply MUST enter this in the MM.org contest! This is a seriously, knock-your-socks-off fanfic! Where to begin? The depth of each character is beyond amazing! The way you elaborately meshed it into present times is utter perfection. The angst, the happiness, the sadness, the excellent action scenes, and the plentiful comedic scenes… I was LMAOROFL in my CONSUMMATE favorite scene of the entire story in Chapter 14 between Hiko and Kamiya, OH MY GODS!, that scene had me in tears, I was laughing so hard!!! Not to mention, my GOD, those steamy lemons! (I wish I could write lemons as beautiful as yours! GODS, Kenshin is to die for! To want to scream in pleasure, only to stay silent and increase the intensity… *heart's going pitter-patter again…* Oh yeah, and I find the age difference EXTREMELY arousing, her at 22 and him at 30.) The relationships are all complex and intricately woven stupendously. The plot has perfect flow. How do you write a review praiseworthy enough to show just how much an author moved you? I have one word for you, from the bottom of my heart: Katajikenai.
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Reviewed By: PersianRurouni [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 19:37 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omgosh poor kaoru everyone is leaving her in the dark about something, I actually think the whole interuption is torture but then it makes the story better in a way, but please by all means move there relationship along!!! i love your writing and there is sadly no way i can express how much i am enjoying this story. Thank you for updating, I'll be anxiously waiting for the next chapter :D
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Reviewed By: Chi no Kaori [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 04:25 EDT
Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this story ^_^. I especially liked how you handled with Aoshi and Megumi's characters, giving a different side to them without going OOC. I'm looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: Deadly_Crimson On: March 29, 2007 11:38 EDT
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To tell you the truth, this is the first fanfic of kenshin i have really read. I've been looking for a good one for ages but everyone seemed to be writing crap things, all they can come up with is: a new villain has arrived! blah blah....anyways, I really enjoyed these four chapters. i thought that an alternate world wouldn't fit in kenshin since it would take the best of him away, but i was obviously mistaken. I do hope you update, and thanks for the good read.
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Reviewed By: PersianRurouni [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 20:34 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!@ you can't keep me hanging like that!!! omg update update update. loooooovvvvveeee the story. Please update i know life can get really busy sometimes but i look forward to the next chapter :D
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Reviewed By: Kireina Kitsune1083 On: December 26, 2006 18:04 EST
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Yeah!!! I love this story. I was so bumed when i saw that it was no longer on Fan Fiction.net. I am going through all of my favorite stories and archiving them on an e-drive. Please up-date soon so I can get the rest of this one. It's so well written. It is in my top 3 favorite fanfiction of all time. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Clemendaworld On: November 07, 2006 20:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad to see you again. I love your stories. Too bad ff.net took you off. Hope you update soon. Take care and god bless
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Reviewed By: xJediJainax On: September 28, 2006 19:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this fanfic before and it is one of my favorites. I have it on my hard drive and I'm glad to see you're posting it here.
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Title: I definetly remember this story. ^^
Reviewed By: Guardian Angel of ALL Anime [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 12:46 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You're posting all your works here. Thats good because since Guilty Pleasures is gone. I couldn't read your works on the site. T_T But now I can read them here. Though I have to say that a lot of the words were cut off in both of the chapters. It was difficult to read, I wonder if mediaminer cut it off? Anyway, I would love to re-read this story again. Please post more chapters of this good story! Bye for now. ^_~
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