| "The Dance of The Chuunin" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Nimiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked the ending! you've done a great job. ^^
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Title: you've captured my heart!
Reviewed By: Nimiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 01:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more! I love Sasuke/Hinata pairings. And your story is so great! Please oh please, update soooon! *does puppy eyes* .~.
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: sweet-candi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XP keep it comming! i need to find out more!!
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Reviewed By: akon On: November 05, 2006 12:50 CST
Comment/Review:
okay you're getting a little random
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Reviewed By: HI On: November 04, 2006 14:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY KEEP IT GOING
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Title: dance of the chuunins
Reviewed By: rach121094 On: November 01, 2006 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! oh and please write more!
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Title: NICE
Reviewed By: tigrasa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY NICE..
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Reviewed By: Loolana On: October 24, 2006 18:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok, i love the story, but im strongly suggesting you put up the couples/pairings. like if this is a SasuSaku and NaruHina fic (my preferable pairings)
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Title: dance of the chuunin
Reviewed By: rdb102619994 On: October 08, 2006 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
c'mon write a nother chapter already it's getting really really good ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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Title: dance of the chuunin
Reviewed By: sohappy On: October 07, 2006 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hurry up with the next chapter! come on chop chop!
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Reviewed By: sask_shino_shika [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like this story very much. It is very funny at some points.
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Reviewed By: ZzHintazZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first it was hard to keep up with, but keep the name thing I under stand it more. keep up the good work and update soon! ^^
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Title: the dance of the chuunin
Reviewed By: sohappy On: September 30, 2006 08:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story characters are like the real origanal ones but at the same time made with creativity and craziness.You make it were the reader is waiting for more of this exciting story. I like everything you put in and i'm very excited to read the upcoming chapter, I encorage you to keep writing.and I agree with the statement above that people will stop reading if you slow down but take your time also or else it won't show that creative spark.
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Reviewed By: sask_shino_shika [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 21:37 CDT
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This is a really really good story. Keep it up.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: The Black Miroku On: September 28, 2006 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um yeah nice start but make sure you update quickly or people will stop reading
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