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| "Inside me." Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Amazing ending On: September 29, 2007 02:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was amazing, I like it better than the original, I mean puff and Snape is gone (???). You captured Snape's essence into a fitting story and gave it an awesome ending. You also depicted Voldemort and the death eater character and the perception to an outsider (mad man with a naive goal) I do not have enough praises. Congrats on this story and keep writing Still surprised you truly deserve more review.
| Title: Dark and twisted
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 19:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
You captured the untold darkness of the dark side in HP and have told a quite believable story from Snape's POV. I am surprised you are not flooding with reviews.
| Reviewed By: Sakiku [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 05:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that's a great story! I've never seen Snape portrayed that well. I especially like the way you let him interact with his fellow Slytherins - not really comfortable with them, but not hostile either. I can see just how he becomes the acerbic Potions Master of the HP-books. You make him a complex character, and his psychological development is astounding. I love the way you understate major events in Snape's life: You never mentioned explicitly just what happened to make Severus very wary of uninformed potions consumers, and that makes it even more fitting for Snape. Also, your writing style is improving from chaper to chapter. In the first one, there were several phrases that just - I don't know what to call it - made me stumble, somewhat hindered the flow of narration. But in the last chapter, I've either gotten used to your very unique writing style, or you have managed to smooth out those 'bumps'. Anyway, it was a very enjoyable read: great characterization, unique writing style, and very mature narration. Thank you very much!
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