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Reviewed By: misty1 On: January 30, 2011 10:30 EST
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I really like this story and I still want the Nieji/Harry pairing. I hope you finish it, I hope you're still alive. |
Reviewed By: twinofdeath [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2010 15:35 EDT
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I like the story and if you like the pairings as well I would sugest either Ibiki/Harry or Itachi/Harry.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2009 14:29 EDT
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excellent LOL I'm highly amused as to your end of Riddle. Nicely done. I'm looking forward to seeing how things turn out when he does return as Iruka seems to be one hell of a mother hen. a deadly one at that considering he's fully trained ninja like a good chunk of his village.
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Reviewed By: jacque On: August 04, 2009 16:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you dont update soon Im going to be very sad this story is genuis!Since when are there two Potters is a good one two! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: kathyo On: July 25, 2009 17:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Kira, so glad to see another chappie! It appears that Fawkes has bonded with Harry( 3 familiars?). Will we find out what exactly happened? Will Fawkes be able to tell Harry? and how much longer before the battle with Voldemort? Keep up the great work! grea9
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Reviewed By: iguana girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 13:00 EST
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come on!!!! i need more!!!! please?????
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Title: omg!
Reviewed By: shattered-words (too lazy to log on) On: October 21, 2008 15:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'd almost forgotten about this story! thank you thank you thank you for updating at last! n_n i can't wait for the next chapter lol even if the wait is the same as last time. it'll be epic when i read the next chapter! good job! well written, almost no grammer mistakes and a good plot that keeps the reader entertained. cheers
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Reviewed By: Vescas On: October 21, 2008 13:22 EDT
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You're still alive! and updating this XD It makes me so happy. and now you've attacked hogwarts, but Kakashi is home safe... *sniff* I want to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2008 12:42 EDT
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You're right, that was short. However it had a lot of detail in it and I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see how they react to this new mess.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 12:28 EDT
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Love the story, but is there any chance of an update? Because seriously, a year since you last updated any of your stories is a total pain in the ass, and updates would be vastly appreciated. So, update soon? Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2008 02:35 EDT
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I'm impressed with your story telling. Please keep writing on this. I'm looking forward to seeing how far Kakashi can recover with the care of the uminos not to mention how well Harry will do as a replacement on various ninja teams on D rank missions. it'll be fun to see what other ninjas think of him when they see a "ninja" that uses strange jutsu lol. Keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: Triva On: August 25, 2007 23:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stupendous! I love the novel outlook on Harry's past and the manner in which his future is being confronted. The characters are being portrayed just perfectly, and the plot is most intriguing, while being as well humorous and emotional. Also, the enigma of what the rookies went through is still apparent in a manner unobstrusive but memorable. I can't wait to read wait occurs next!!! Please update!!!
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Reviewed By: ItsMeMario On: August 02, 2007 16:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update... I love this story... Please??
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Title: Love for Chaper 17 +Name Suggestions
Reviewed By: SilverGreeneye [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 17:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Time to play "Name That Cat!" Actually, I did a little research at Wikipedia and Behind the Name (dot com). Harry's alternate name could be Lynx, since caracals are also called Persian Lynxes. Another possibility is Fahd, a masculine name that means "panther" in Arabic: he looks a bit like a mini-panther, and caracals are sometimes used as hunting cats in Iran. Or, they could pay tribute to both the caracal's jumping ability and to Piers Anthony and call him Jumper.
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Reviewed By: Drac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 20:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis is great. I never would have thought of a caracal. Fun little buggers to watch. Maybe "Tuftear" for his name? Or perhaps "Slyfoot"? dunno, just loving the story. ^^
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