| "The Shadow of the Past; The Light of the Future" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nequam_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 11:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful job though the writing didn't see to have enough feeling as i have hoped. though the introduction could have gone a little more smoothly-this very nice!
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Reviewed By: Yamiaaliyan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I've read a few of your Fan-fics but never actully knew what to put...so here it gose...i love the creativity in here ^^ keep it up, i love reading about all of the fun adventers and cant wait to read more of your work...all i can truly say is that this hads been one of the meany fan-fics that i just wanna read over again ^^
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 15:02 CDT
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Ooh I like the way you did that...bringing the modern day Atem back and the explination was well thought out, I'm impressed. I have to admit I also enjoyed the interaction between the rest of the group prior to Yugi and Atem's return. (Thanks for letting us know what happened to Anzu)...Overall I enjoyed the story and I'm looking forward to the next one!
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 18:27 CDT
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Wow love these latest chapters...I'm glad that Atem's going back to Yugi's time with her... I wonder what the gangs gonna say when they see the Pharaoh? can't wait to find out....
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Reviewed By: DragonAngel of Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 22:16 CDT
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I love the newest chapters!!! Please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 09:42 CDT
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NO NO NO! What have you done to poor Atem? What's Yugi gonna do in the future without him? Is she going back or staying? Will she be happy?It's a good couple of chapters though I'm glad Atem was able to find seto and that Yugi was able to help rebuild everything. *shakes head* poor poor Atem what did he do to deserve this...
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 16:42 CDT
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Me likey--what a chapter!...Giggling Goddesses,Zorc defeated, Atem off to find Seto...but then what? I can't wait to find out.
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 16:30 CDT
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Aww man...not another cliffie! oh well... gotta say I loved this chapter the banter between the two Atem's was great, shame the modern one had to disappear he will be back though won't he...I suppose we'll find out soon! see you soon
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Reviewed By: DragonAngel of Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 00:13 CDT
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I love this story!!! I love the new chapters!! Can't wait to read the next. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 14:37 CDT
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Oh now your just being mean...
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 14:10 CDT
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Wow girl your on a roll! Good chapter I do like it when the 'future' Atem and Bakura interact it never fails to produce a smile...Do we get an account on what happens to Anzu? *evil grin* see you soon
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 09:34 CDT
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NO,NO,NO, Don't start with the cliffies! A good chapter though, but did you really have to leave it there?, I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: DragonAngel of Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 03:03 CDT
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Great new chapter!!! Please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another good chapter from you...and quickly too *I'm just teasing ^_~ * You know the more I read the More I hate Akhenaden, what a jerk! but still I suppose every story needs one (jerk that is). I look forward to reading the next bit and don't forget NO PRESSURE! whenever you're ready.
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Title: YAY!!!
Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 08:46 CDT
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woohoo! an update... just kidding. I know you must feel guilty but stop apologising you did warn us and say there would be a delay as you were using the manga and waiting for the next issue...we'll wait. Got to say I like this chapter, It's a nice idea to give us a chapter dedicated to the present with Atem and Bakura interacting, plus Atem finding out who was responsible for Yugi going to the other school and it's about time you know who got what's coming. See more from you soon...(no pressure!)
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Reviewed By: DragonAngel of Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!!! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 09:53 CDT
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YAY an update!!! and a good one too. Don't worry about the delays, ...you did warn us by saying it was a challenging story so it can only be expected. Just as long as you don't give this up altogether then we'll wait...
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Reviewed By: redconvoy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 11:48 CST
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I like this story, but when Bakura turns to sand in the manga, it's because the Avatar for Zorc was no longer needed. They were playing the memory world as an RPG game. Bakura would have just keeled over and died due to his foolish thinking he would gain power. I can't wait for Heba to return to the present so Atemu could confess how he feels about her.
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Reviewed By: Koishii No Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG. Please continue. It's really good =D. Wubbers you for writing such a good fic =D
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 08:15 CST
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Awww that was so sweet...He's finally found out about his feelings for Yugi about time! (nicely written by the way)and you just gotta love grandpa! Plus I had to chuckle at the idea of Bakura with a bunny bracelet..so cute! **You know he's gonna kill you for that**
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've got to say it is amazing the amount of work you are putting into this fic to keep it enjoyable and to keep us lucky readers hooked!
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Reviewed By: Koishii No Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 05:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this fic is excellent! Loved how you made Yuugi into a girl lol. Very well structured and lots fo description, helping the reader git sucked into the fic. Good job writing it so keep up the wonderful work and hope to see from you again soon =D.
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 04:18 CST
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Woo Hoo!! *grabs YGO Cupid and does happy dance* Oh yeah they kissed...sweet....more please [story I mean]
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow! has it been that long?? man I'm slacking... Just when I thought it couldn't get any better it does...I'll tell you what though kiddo, the way you've written it, Yugi makes a good girl..I'm impressed.
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Title: yeah!
Reviewed By: Chibi Hikiri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 23:10 CST
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yugi kissed atemu ^______^
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Title: doom
Reviewed By: Chibi Hikiri [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 19:07 CST
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i'm gonna sing the doom song 'doom, doom, doom'
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Title: 0.0
Reviewed By: Chibi Hikiri [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 01:47 CST
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i feel sorry for the girl lisa was yelling at 'run forest run!'
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 11:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Groans* Thought we were going to have a sweet kiss happenin' there then. Still...keep it going.
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Title: UoU
Reviewed By: pequena [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story you should write more fics like this
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 19:12 CST
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*Sniff* Ok that got the tears flowing...it was so sad, poor Mahado...nicely written though.
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