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| "A Case of Double Personality" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Title: :)
Reviewed By: *mari* On: December 21, 2006 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:) hi girlie! :) i was so happy to find not only one but TWO new chapters for me to read! yay! and then to disocver that the second was written in MY honor made me feel great! thank you so much! and yes, i do believe that you "bashed" her up a "bit" but this only heightens my curiosty as to why, and your "all things happen for a reason" clue! i can only fathom what exciting events are going to happen further on! i can't wait! i also love that you keep the readers guessing! you are never boring! and i have been known to be kept on my toes, especially when you end one of your chapters with a cliff-hanger! one can only wait anxiously and as patiently as they can! i am glad that you enjoy my reviews! being able to take the good and the bad of critics is highly important! and you still move head on! i have no bad to review because i have always been in awe and have held great admirance for all who can tangilize the many complicated thoughts of the mind! all i can say is be true to the characters, put yourself in their shoes and try to experience what they would feel or do at any given moment! know the characters ages, personality, likes, dislikes, and history! you might never mention these in your story but this is key to how your stories present themselves! make it personal, as though they were your dear friedns! in order to write out someone's life you have to be that person!and THAT is a true, rare, and unique trait that authors share! you rock girl!!!!!! i will be going on a family trip so i probably won't be able to get on for a while! :( *shudders* oh the horror! :) you have an awesome vacation (i'm sure that you are enjoying it!) and a merry christams!!! love ya! :) mari :)
| Title: noooo!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: *mari* On: December 14, 2006 00:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^.^ hi girlie! i JUST finished the last chappie! *tear* :( i didn't want it to end! seriously! i need more!!! i think that it is amazing that you can think of this in your head and materialize it onto paper! your creativeness is exquisite! it's all about the little things. like the fact that sesshomaru saying midoriko's name would relinquish a flood of her memories into kumiko's own. and MANY other things! AMAZING! i love that you are able to keep sessh's character in check! he did seem to doubt himself more about his attraction to a lowly "human" in the other story though! i think he knows what he wants now! ^.~ i love how you make the chracters personal by sharing their thoughts with the readers. they are so perceptive! and the double personality is awesome! i love it! i can tell that this story will be just as promising as the other! please continue and know that i am waiting and am a very pleased fan! i'd write more, really, i could go on!! but i think i should stop! i have an english final tomorrow and i believe your eyes would begin to hurt by the next 2000 characters of letters i have left! oh, and thank you for the reviewer responses! so sweet of you! but you deserve it girl! you just do! hope you are doing well! take care! good night! :) love ya! :) mari :)
| Title: yay!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: :) mari :) On: December 12, 2006 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:) hey girlie!!!!!!!!!!!!! you rock BEYOND belief! ya know that? :) i was working really hard on my final reviews *cough* (procrastinating) ^.~ *wink wink* and i decided to go to your story to once AGAIN see if i could find your ...well....story! :) and, low and behold i did! all thanks to you! thank you so much! oh, and i'm liking the story! i've only read the first chapter but i had to review immediately afterwards because i was so happy! i'm glad that you got better, and i hope you have an AWESOME day! you deserve it! bye! :) love, mari :)
| Reviewed By: shikiori(nsi) On: November 18, 2006 18:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Sry. I never got to reveiwing this one with school and all. I love how they just switch bodies so easily. And at the beginning where they didn't share each other's memories, that was cool. Sess's reaction t both of them is, like, ttly awsome. as you an see with the (nsi) thing, I'm a mm.org user again! except I haven't logged in in a long time. I turned 13 yesterday and went to an anime convention today, I wanted to buy a Sess plushie but my mom wouldn't let me after buying an FMA necklace, haori, hakamas, tabi, and kobuso (or however you spell it). I think I typed in a lot for my first reveiw on this story. And only 3 sentences actually have anything to do with the story. I got a henna tatoo on my hand so I look like Sess. I've almost beaten my record of using 1000 characters in the reveiw, lucky me. I have a new quote too: I don't suffer from attention deficet hyperactivity disorder; I enjoy every minute of it- Did you just say something about chickens?
| Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 10:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Nice please update soon
| Title: How can this be posible???????
Reviewed By: negri87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant belive it!!!!! How can this be posible????? U dont have any reviews. What is it with u people that can see somthing just under your nose??? This story promise too be very very good and u can see that just reading the first chapter. I cant really belive that you dont have any review this is just... f**k.... dont matter you are doing a great job wrigting. Dont stop and good luck
| Title: How can this be possible???
Reviewed By: negri87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant belive it!!! How can this be posible??? You dont have any reviews on this great story. Anyone who read the first chapters must see that this promise to be a very very good story. OMG what is it with u people that cant see more that your nose??? Anyway i like it and think its great. keep writhing.
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