| "Good Night" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Oh My God!
Reviewed By: ShadowedDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 10:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, i really enjoyed what you wrote so far. If you are looking for constructive critisism here it is, i'm sorry if you don't though. With the "would ..." Most of what you want to do is just add -ed at the end of the verb. Other than that your grammar is really good. Just thought i'd add that in. But I love the overall plot of the story! It's wonderful how you got Integra and Seras to be friends and Alucard just showing up around Seras all of the time. It really is great! Pleas continue with it, it really is enjoyable to read!
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Reviewed By: blackrosevampire15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Itz Kool and I like it. Plz Continue!
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Reviewed By: Luner Fox Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 11:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Please continue!!
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