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| "Dragon Fighters" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] | Reviewed By: SilentWillow920 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 14:06 CDT
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Alright, alright! I get the hint! I'll review! (...Again... -_-;;) Alright, chapter 23 was funny as usual... Yet the ending was rather... Sudden.
**Shruggs** Maybe I just write too much angsty stuff... I'm not used to straight out humor...
And I have to ask...
Have the characters forgotten their original mission? Or has the author just not dabbled with any animes other than DBZ? If the latter is the case, feel free to contact me. I'll suggest several good ones and provide you with all the info you need. This story is too ass-laughing funny to go down the same tube as... er... **meekly** ...my stories do... -_-;; | Reviewed By: JoezeeCanadian [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 23:10 CDT
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This, isn't really a review, seeing as how I've read every chapter, and reviewed..... uh three times, and got beat up, or threatened in all of them..... *peers about making sure there are no threats, but feels relatively safe, considering it's 1:06 AM where he lives (Atlantic Standard Time[Canada Maritime Region ^^;;] not sure if I should love it, hate it, or destroy it ^^)* aaaanywho...... for the past while(I dunno how long, I lost track of time when I grabbed my doodle book) I have been doodling my, uh, vision I guess, of Goshi, using reference from uhm.... chapter 8 I think..... and this is the end result ^^: http://jzc.fcpages.com/Images/goshi.jpg (you can see it here ^^) AAAAAAnnnywho, if author likes this version, I can redo it on blank paper(so sue me if my doodle pad is a notebook with lined paper! I'm kinda money devoid!!!!), and, possibly color..... although, that is warned against, considering my only non computer coloring method is pencil crayons, and I suck horribly at cg'ing.... i need practices ^^;;;; Anywho, can e-mail me at: joezeeca@subspacerelay.com so..... yeah. I'm on almost every day..... yeeeup... I'm ranting, aren't I? Need Caffeine..... *meanders off, a frying pan whizing by behind him* Damnit..... Go my Beaver Pets!!! Attack with your, uhm..... big, tails.... and, tree chopping teeth!!! Mwahaha!!!! | Reviewed By: ancara_iii On: August 09, 2002 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! CLIFFHANGER!!!!!! GRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!
I Must Know More!!! What happens next? What happens next? OMG!!!!! I NEED MORE!!!! ("Pant") ("Pant") Ok, I'm ok now. This is an swesome fic. I've been following it since it started! I almost died when you went away with your family for 3 weeks!!! DON'T EVER LEAVE ME AGAIN!!!! Anyways, Great Fic! Love it! Keep those chapters coming :) | Reviewed By: JoezeeCanadian [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 11:24 CDT
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Note to self, drool all over the floor later. Hehe... great chapter..... could Goshi actually be jealous? ...... Naw, she doesn't like Raditz anyways ^^ *innocent whistle* No, I do not know what's going to happen next..... what..... what do you mean I'm supposed to know, how am I supposed to know, I haven't finished my time machine yet! ..... uh.... yeah..... I haven't even started...... another note to self: Find a frame of free time in which to attempt to draw Goshi...... mwahahaha!!! *turns and sees Goshi behind him with veins popping out of her forehead* uhmmm...... Me go running now.... fear frying pan!!!! *runs for the hills, Goshi hot on his heels swinging her frying pan* WAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!! | Reviewed By: Kei On: August 08, 2002 11:15 CDT
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Woah !!!! Chapter 23 was AWESOME !!!! I really liked it !! ^____^ I wonder what'll happend to Goshi...? PPPPPPLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE
Write S'more !! | Reviewed By: Matoko Shizaki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2002 10:22 CDT
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OMG! PLEASE, WRITE MORE! I CAN'T HELP BUT WONDER WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!! | Reviewed By: Matoko Shizaki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2002 08:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fic! I only read the prologue but it still was the coolest! I love the part where Ray falls and hits the doorbell. I can remember doing that once... ^_^;; | Reviewed By: JoezeeCanadian [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 18:09 CDT
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me likes Mass insanity, mass hilariousness(that usually doesn't make sense to the unhomoured soul, which I'm not sure if such a soul exists or not). Great story, especially with Raditz getting clunked all the time *cackles and ducks from a frying pan which is flung at his head* Yeaaaah..... I'd better run before the frying pans start flying again.... *glances back and forth, grabs the rather large burlap sack he carries behind him, grabs Goshi, tosses her into the sack, which currently contains five cat people already, and makes a run for it, only to be stopped by a few dozen frying pans, one kamehamaha wave, bad spelling which plagues him, and one Raditz' foot* Ouch...... X_X...... when I regain conciousness, I hope there'll be more to read..... if I can still see through the bandages.... X_X | Reviewed By: SilentWillow920 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2002 15:36 CDT
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Love the story, but I just have to ask...
How many sugar lumps did you put in your coffee today? That is, how many cups of nearly-entirely-sugar caffenated coffee did you have today? I mean... Wow. I doubt that I could get that hyper and survive it... | Reviewed By: JoezeeCanadian [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2002 20:18 CDT
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*peers from behind a tree, his head wrapped in bandages, and several lumps protruding from his head, due to mass frying pan whaloping* Uhm.... I'm being nice and reviewing.... and watching out for frying pans..... Me likes funnies, Vegeta short, yeah.... short short short ^_^.... Vegeta is right behind me, isn't he? *turns around slowly* Uhm..... I'd better..... run.... fast..... Keep writing.... and waddya mean it's near the end, it can't be almost done *whines just before Vegeta begins pummeling him* Ouch.... X_X when will I learn to keep my mouth shut..... do your civic duty! Review..... or Vegeta may come after you, and blow up your home, and everyone you love.......... .... OH dear god no!!! Not my spine! I still need that!!! AUUUUGHHHHHH........ *flees in fear of Vegeta* | Reviewed By: WolfAxis On: July 11, 2002 12:46 CDT
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHAAHHHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! ahem good story. hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha | Reviewed By: WolfAxis On: July 09, 2002 13:30 CDT
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I would like to read more. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE FASTER PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE CLIFFHANGERS ARE STARTING TO KILL ME WAHH!!!!
ahem please write more | Reviewed By: cherryblossom0286 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
er... You have two chapter 15's and two chapter 17's just wanted to tell ya :D
But anyways great story :D Update soon! | Reviewed By: LanaPanther [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 17:53 CDT
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-_-; You are evil. ^_^ I like that!!!! (all other reviewers sweatdrop) Hurry and write the next chapter!!!
Lana | Reviewed By: LanaPanther [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2002 14:38 CDT
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Cool! Can't wait for you tpo write again!
Lana | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] |
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