Reviewed By: j0yrid3 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm proud to give you the first review, the story was great, if a little sad. If Naraku's gone, the jewel's gone, Inuyasha's gone with Kagome, everything IS pointless. But I lied the way you described Kikyou's feelings. But she didn't need to stab herself, you know (I don't even know if she dies from that), she could just stop receiving the souls. Well, I hope you take all this as constructive criticism. All and all it was a good fic!
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