Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2002 07:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Your writing style is good in the way that you descripe their motions and looks. You also have a nice word selection ("big" words ^.~). Personally I wish this was longer since it seemed as if I had just gotten to see Shiori with new eyes when it was all suddenly over. Otherwise it's good--I do see a new side to her. |
