| "Let Me Go" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: I almost read it
Reviewed By: L_N [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 10:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Take or leave this review. I am giving it to you because I saw serious potential in the part you pasted in the synopsis. You are probably very talented. You deserve to know this: Those slashes you put in your formating to designate when they are thinking put me off. I can't read a fic like that. This is a total shame. Your teaser was so funny I HAD to click on your fic. And I *rarely* read fics, anymore. To see the formatting you opted for was such a crusher. Don't do that. Please. I know this is probably going to piss you off with me. But I would rather piss you off and make you rethink this formating than blow smoke up your butt just to look good.
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Reviewed By: drkangeldemon On: November 14, 2006 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so great! I love it when Eiri is sex deprived! I hope you continue with the story! I enjoy ver, very much! Bye!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 19:18 CST
Comment/Review:
is there anymore? I haven't seen Gravitation, only a few clips. This is good!!!
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