Reviewed By:Rinkusu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 14:08 CDT Comment/Review: That was a really good fic!!!!! Im suprised that ed said that roy was picking his nose because about 5 lines before that I was thinking 'Id laugh if ed said roy was picking his nose' (I laughed) anyways great fic! Keep writing!
Reviewed By:Bardiel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 01:38 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: Great fic, My face is still sore from laughing at the scene featuring the Furhrer. I think it's great and you should keep going 'cause i can't wait to see what happens with Roy's plan to hook up Ed with Winry. KEEP IT UP!!!
