|"Trapped In Kingdom Hearts + other things" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]|
| Reviewed By: brain0loss0due0to0you [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 15:42 CST|
Style of Writing: 5 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
I'm not gonna put all 9s and 10s to make you feel better. It's a good idea, your story, but it could use some work. You're not very descriptive, everything's just there. It's hard to read sentences when there's barely any punctuation when you need to seperate ideas. And I don't know what it's about making every sentence its own paragraph. I'm not saying you should stop, you're creative, but I just think that the story can improve a great deal.
| Title: Kill me now....|
Reviewed By: Lunitic Pandora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 01:46 CST
Overall Rating: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
Geeze...Why do all you writes have to go and stop at the good parts, lol..Please, keep writing, this is a wonderful story..I'm not even minding the bits of skipping...!..Keep up the good work!
| Title: this is cool|
Reviewed By: psychic guardian angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 06:46 CST
Style of Writing: 9 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
dude this is cool especialy the harry potter world. i cant wait to read what happens next so keep writing please.