|"Legend of the Rapid Riders." Reviews/Comments [ 5 ]|
| Title: Chapter Two|
Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 13:54 CDT
Style of Writing: 5 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
It was interesting, I'll give it that. Don't believe for an instant that Nodoka could beat Cologne, nor that Cologne would even allow Shampoo to be adopted by anyone as she gains nothing from such an arrangement. And if you're going to make all the Nerima females that accompanied Ranma to the Pokemon world his 'sisters'...why even bother having them tag along? Suggestions: Either have Ranma fight Cologne for his freedom from the Kiss of Marriage, or have Ranma-CHAN adopted as Shampoo's sister. Ukyo being adopted by Nodoka works to remove her as a serious contender for Ranma's hand in marriage. Neither Shampoo, nor Ukyo, however, would be completely out of the running though. And Kasumi and Nabiki...could have had ulterior motives for including themselves, aside from wanting to start new lives. Seriously, immediately removing ALL of the female characters from potential pairings with Ranma tends to undermine the very reasons for their inclusion in the story. Otherwise, you could have just sent Ranma, alone, to the Pokemon world.
| Reviewed By: DrewB1442 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 23:26 CDT|
Not bad, not completly original, but not bad. I'll have to wait and see.
| Title: Review|
Reviewed By: Fire Dragon-Ohjisama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 13:03 CST
Give Shampoo a Nyarmar (pokemon #431), Mouse should have a Psyduck, Nabiki should have a Meowth, and Kasumi should have one evolved Eevee form.
| Reviewed By: Crazed One On: December 22, 2006 14:52 CST|
Style of Writing: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Great story so far! Is Ranma's crew going to meet Ash and company? That'd be cool!
| Title: Tails 1|
Reviewed By: Sonic 1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 20:10 CST
This is n' like anything I've seen before. That many of the Ranma cast in the Pokemon world?