| "Power Struggle" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Strutline On: May 14, 2002 10:45 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your other fic better because it has more fighting and action in it, but I really enjoy the emotional dramas you have put in this story. You should continue this fic! Good job! |
Reviewed By: Bulma6189 On: May 13, 2002 21:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
I get it now! It makes sense that it is an alternative universe, because they couldn't be twins otherwise. Good job! |
Reviewed By: Vash_Lover On: May 13, 2002 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Incredible! So creative! I really hope you keep writing this story!
{I just loved the part when Turles tries to attack his own reflection!)*^_^* |
Reviewed By: Ballistic [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2002 11:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm not rying to be an ass or anything, I just wanted to point something out:
Goku and Turles aren't twins (duh!)
Turles is simply a physical representation of what Goku would have been if he didn't lose his memory. |
