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Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm amazed at how personal that story got considering it's length. I think I've always hoped Ed was really like that on the inside and this is probably the first story I've read where Its been shown that way. Thank you for making me not seem crazy for thinking that way!It was a very believable story.
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Reviewed By: anmbcuconnfan On: November 27, 2006 07:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You deserve every ten that I gave you, the story was marvelous. I also agree witht he other reviewers, and believe that it would make a great story if you did decide to continue it... I would like to see more, but since I know that you have a LOT of other stories that you're working on (also very awesome stories^_^) I would certainly understand if you did keep it a oneshot... I do wish you luck on your other stories, however, and I will keep cheering you on!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 (4 got 2 sign in) On: November 07, 2006 14:54 CST
Comment/Review:
this is very interesting. u should make it in2 a longer story. i think it could turn out very good. so, plz make it a longer story.
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Reviewed By: Megalodon On: November 04, 2006 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this very much. I enjoy storied where the characters stay in character, and the situations sound believable. You pull it off well. I almost never write reviews (bad me!) but I wanted to for this one, because it sounds like a great prologue to a longer story. It's fine on its own, but I have every confidence that you could continue it into a great fic. Please consider continuing?
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Avarwen (NSI) On: November 03, 2006 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good. The way you had Ed's internal conflict about staying the same for everyone else, while changing on the inside was really realistic and something I could easily imagine Ed thinking about.
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