| "Living Weapons" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 21:19 CDT
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I am sorry that you arn't getting more reviews cuz it looks like a good storyline. Keep it up and I am sure that more will review! I liked the last part. Keep trying to pull it all together. sometimes it does seem to jump abit but I am sure you'll do a good job in the end!!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 09:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It all flows very nicely now. Good job. I can see how the chapters fit together now. Keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 21:20 CST
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Ya I can imagine that it can be time consuming. I really have enjoyed the chapters that you have up I'd like to see the "fillers" between some of the chapters. You have a really neat style of writing. I have read LOTS of fics and HUNDREDS of books ( I am an avid reader! ) and I really think that you have a talent. Take your time and let your thoughts flow onto the paper. Even if they are just random thoughts about where you want to go with it. Then you can begin to connect the dots. I like the abstractness of the story so don't lose that but some in between info would be helpful. Again keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 17:24 CST
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Very tantalizing last chapter. I really liked the history injected into this one. I also really liked the last paragraph. I feel again like it's going somewhere! I think that I'll be going back and reading the prevous chapters and see if I missed something. I didn't quite get chapter 5. I feel like I missed something, like I've been left out of the loup. It's probably just me. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 16:23 CST
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Good new chapter. you might want to check and see if there is something wrong with the way that the emailings for updates is. I keep getting like all the chapters as new. I'm not sure what would make that happen unless you are reloading all the updates and new chapter at the same time? Anyway, that was a great new chapter. Liked the groveling that Miroku has to do. The interacting between Keg and Inu wasn't as clear as in the prevous chapters. But it was still an enjoyable read. Thank you!!!
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Reviewed By: rach (aka pokiepal) On: November 29, 2006 17:05 CST
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Like chapter 3 too. keep the story moving! it really is good so far. I agree with one of the other reviewers that said that it will be better with each chapter. So far each one has been great.
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Reviewed By: Rach (aka pokiepal) On: November 29, 2006 16:46 CST
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I will give you a review since you asked SSOO nicely! Serously I really do like your story. Though there isn't to much action so far (chapter 2 ~ getting ready to read chapter 3) I will be intrested to see what you have instore for our favoriate characters. Is Kouga going to show up? Will Kikyou play a part in this story other then in the intro? What about shippou? I am enjoying the intreaction of Sango and Kagome. I can actually 'see' how serously Sango takes what she is doing. I always wondered about that in the manga if she was 'girly' or 'studious'. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 21:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great chap!!! Updae soon...plz!!!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 17:44 CST
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This is a really good start for what could be a GREAT story!! keep updating I really like the way you started this off. I like the fact that you started off with a little backround as to who they were. I will be looking in my inbox for updates!!!
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Title: You Got My Review
Reviewed By: InuKag09 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thisstory is an interesting one. In my opinion, it's going to get better as you write. Lots of excitement going on. UPDATE PLLLLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sincerely, CG
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 01:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great fic!!! but a little confusing cuz no line 2 seperate the scenes...
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