|"My Justice For You" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ]|
| Title: Hey|
Reviewed By: rebelbot [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2008 15:32 CDT
Style of Writing: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
when are you going to update
| Title: ^^|
Reviewed By: Whitetail [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 20:01 CST
Ooohh....very interesting so far! Keep it up!
| Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 15:49 CST|
Splitting up probably not the wisest miove ever. But where's Genkimaru and Cobramaru? And What's Tallgeese and co going to do? Please contiue.
| Reviewed By: MVG1 (again ._.; ) On: January 24, 2007 12:36 CST|
Wow, Cyber, that's harsh. o_O; Maybe he made a mistake since he first started the fic a lonnnggg time ago? But he's right, the Princess wouldn't be there if Tallgeese and the two were still around: it just doesn't work like that... My two cents, Lord Talec: replace the Princess with Genkimaru, it'll make sense that way. 6.6; And maybe throw in a sneaking Cobramaru. I dunno. Something like that.
| Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 (not logged in :B) On: January 24, 2007 12:32 CST|
Oh boy, this is getting interesting. ^^; Splitting up ain't a good idddeeaaa... well, anyway, I just realized: where's Genkimaru if the Princess is here? Or did he get away with Cobramaru... ? At any rate, I'm glad to see you're updating too! ^-^ Keep it up!
| Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 On: January 24, 2007 08:48 CST|
Wait, huh? Where did the Princess come from? And what's going on with Talgeese's gang? If she's part of the gang, wouldn't Deathscythe and Talgeese be long gone? You're story no longer makes any sense! You can't just randomly add characters like that! I thought this story took place during the Minov Sea arc, not the second Minov Sea arc! Now I'm confused and emotionally against reading the rest of the story.
| Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 05:42 CST|
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
This is so darn interesting! ;_; Please please continue Talec~! x3 I played a demo of Silent Hill 3, that's all. ^^; heheheh. But I'm loving this still! It seems to be a little focused on Zero though- and if Zero's spooked I'd think Baku would be twice that haha. o_-; So yes, please please update? ^.^
| Reviewed By: FeatherDragon On: November 04, 2006 11:47 CST|
So far very interesting. Please contiue with this.
| Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 On: November 04, 2006 07:46 CST|
This 'pears to be a very good prologue for a potentially good story...And don't worry, I've never played the game or seen the movie either.