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| "Wolves of Fire, Eagles of Ice" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: goood!
Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 12:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooooh, I likey, I likey. Hell, I like it so much, I drew you fan art! Lucky you XD It's Cloe. I'm not all that good at drawing anilmals, but please, take a look at it. XD I tried. anyyyways, yeah. I like it alot. Keep going withg it. Lotsa luv, Kiki ::::::: (Heres your fanart-) http://usera.imagecave.com/xkikix/2007/Cloe.bmp.jpg
| Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story, it's a great idea. You just need to work on your grammer and spelling. I found it a bit distracting to the story when I had to try to figure out what you were meaning, you can e-mail me if you want help, I'm already doing it for someone else. Also, it appears that one of your chapters posted itself twice, but under different title names (chapter one). Keep up the fight =)
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