| "Strange Bedfellows" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: DarkAngelEmrys On: March 31, 2008 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'I'll bet they're all just jealous….' A perfect ending to a wonderful story. I like how you kept the mood throughout the story. You captured Cloud's personality and inner turmoil perfectly. I like how you portrayed Reno as well; just how I imagined his personality would be. I am a big fan of Reno/Cloud, and this was one of the better ones out there.
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Reviewed By: cloudnomi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 15:49 CDT
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I just wanted to let you know that I think you're a great writer and I love your stories. (though I think I've only read two, hehe) RenoXCloud is love and I can't get enough of them. I think you've inspired me into drawing and writing. (thank god, its about time) Anyway, please keep writing, and I hope to read more of your work.
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Reviewed By: ookamikasumi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 02:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Applause!* You captured that mess inside Cloud's psyche perfectly! AND it was beautifully written too! Bravo!
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Reviewed By: Maddy (not logged in) On: January 10, 2007 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a little late to review this, but oh well. I love it, Iggy. I don't really see much Reno/Cloud fanfics, but then again, I just got into the fandom recently ^_^; The conflict is my favorite part, you're a great author :)
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Title: the end
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 22:31 CST
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: sigh : I love happy endings. I really like this story and I'll be recommending it to people. Delicious and romantic... wow.
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Title: chapter 8 & 9
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 8: Ah! What a way to end a chapter! Poor Reno! I feel so bad for him, but really, what was he expecting from Cloud anyway, this was bound to happen, Cloud is messed up. Cute but crazy in a depressed, self-deprecating way. Chapter 9: ""Yeah, yeah... You know, despite your do-gooder bullshit, you're a pretty fucking selfish guy, Strife," There Reno want, being do damned insightful again, as though he really knew him…." Um, want = went; do = so… I think the sentence is awkward otherwise. Wow, such a great chapter. You wove Advent Children in really well, just the important stuff, keeping the same tone as the rest of the story and ended is beautifully! Wonderful! Looking forward to more ^_^
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Tamlin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 01:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is absolutly amazing. I love it! I started reading it a while ago and got sidetracked so I just finished it and I'm in awe. I initially scoffed at a Cloud/Reno pairing, but now I'm totally sold. Your characters are very well drawn, your description is good, and your storyline is wonderful. I can't wait to see what else you do.
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Reviewed By: rinjin On: November 29, 2006 07:51 CST
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gahh i like it. media miner is sooo much higher quality than fanfiction.net. X]
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Reviewed By: dracoqueen22 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 22:06 CST
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Ah, the beauty of sweet angst. I'm still loving this. Funny, I didn't realize until now that this was before Advent Children. Usually I'm quicker than that. Ooops. Still, pretty good!
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Title: Ch 7
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 15:31 CST
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Another great chapter. I am really please with how you are keeping Cloud IC (from what I understand of his character). He spends so much time in his head, seeming to confuse himself needlessly sometimes (and maybe a little emo, if I understand the slang correctly). And Reno seems really complicated, yay! I like it when a supporting character gets developed. ^_^ This story is from Cloud's perspective, I can't wait to see what else Reno reveals! not only that but I kind of feel that I'm learning about the ways of male love, something I have no experience with and little knowledge. So thanks for that too. ^_^
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Reviewed By: dracoqueen22 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 21:49 CST
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Ah, very good! I want to know more! Love the Reno and Cloud pairing. In a world where every corner is dusted with Cloud and Seph its nice to see a change, not that I don't enjoy Cloud and Seph. Thanks!
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Title: 6
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 19:10 CST
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is this a "and time passes" kind of chapter? is the next one going to be about Reno?
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Title: ch 1-5
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 15:23 CST
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oi, this is so hot! I am usually an Inuyasha fanfiction reader, but this is great! gah, I'm also not usually a yaoi reader, but I'm really enjoying this. I look forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Dracoqueen22(too lazy to sign in) On: November 23, 2006 11:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmmmm, that was hot. And I'll have you know that you've inspired me to write my own Reno/Cloud. Well, slightly different from this but its got Reno and Cloud in it, that's all that matters. Very yummy, I say. And I want to see and know more. Update soon please. Oh, and well written! Good job on that!
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Reviewed By: dracoqueen22 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 00:44 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Grrr, you left me hanging! But I'm rather enjoying this little fic. Good grammar and stuff, which is getting rather difficult to find. Been tossing round my own Cloud/Reno pairing in my head and it's nice to see one out there that's well written. Keep it up! I'm interested to see where this is going!
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