| "Marshmallows" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Addie777 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 02:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was adorable. : ) I couldn't help but smile. I really enjoyed this. I really liked the part when it showed that Itachi feared that he had lost his little brother. It's like big brother mode kicked in. I have a little brother (although he is only seventeen months younger than I) and even though we don't get along, I still defend him from other people. Itachi is the only one that can cause suffering to Sasuke, just like I am the only one allowed to do so to my little brother. : )
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Title: Awwh!
Reviewed By: Mushroom-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 07:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwh! It was so adorable! I love the fact that Itachi could be a nice big brother!
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Title: marshmallows
Reviewed By: itachi wifey [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
omg that was totally asome wow how new itachi could be sweet lol it waz a great story keep writing
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Reviewed By: Indreamland4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 21:32 CST
Comment/Review:
That is sooo CUTE! i really like it and i noticed that the fanfiction done on childhoods are Sasuke's. yeah since the anime did show a huge portion of his childhood.
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Reviewed By: Indreamland4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 21:31 CST
Comment/Review:
That is sooo CUTE! i really like it and i noticed that the fanfiction done on childhoods are Sasuke's. yeah since the anime did show a huge portion of his childhood.
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