|"The Chess Game" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ]|
| Reviewed By: Hexiva On: October 06, 2008 03:34 CDT|
It seems slightly out of character for Light to openly admit to playing games with people's lives. Since he thinks of himself as the hero. Also, at which point is this story set?
| Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 21:08 CDT|
Hmm... I hope that your editing this means that you're considering writing more. I usually try not to read things from anime/manga that I haven't actually seen/read. I failed in this respect. I read this and then went off looking at Death Note character summaries and whatnot. Thanks for inadvertantly pointing me in the direction of a series I can already tell I'm going to enjoy. Thanks for writing! -Your naughty fangirl who is quite behind on reviews, Jess
| Title: Aww.|
Reviewed By: - On: March 01, 2008 22:29 CST
Style of Writing: 9 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Very cute. L has always come across as a very sweet, innocent, slightly awkward little boy to me, and you seem to have detailed that pretty perfectly. Good job. =]
| Reviewed By: I On: April 10, 2007 10:19 CDT|
so cute! :) I loved it!! Too bad it was only a one-shot...
| Reviewed By: skippy the rabid fangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 02:55 CST|
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
aww! it indeed can never be too sweet 0w0 :3 love your writing style *they should play more games!*
| Reviewed By: Kirie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 04:22 CST|
Very cute! I like the story, though I desperatly wish there were longer Death Note Fics here on MM. But I understand that with such a slow forum people aren't that will to write too much seeing as how reviews (or many reviews anyways) are unlikely.