| "Violation of Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 497 ] |
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Title: OMG, duh...
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 21:29 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I COMPLETELY forgot to tell you how pleased with that lemon I was! I think you managed it very well. It was tasteful, reaslistic (as realistic as a snow monkey youkai orgy can be, lol), and interesting, with the addition of the guard (poor guy!). You are SO GREAT at coming up with OC's. SO, I gave this chapter a '10' for Enjoyment, because that was one hella enjoyable lemon. ;o) P.S. I hope me get at least one more SessKag lemon, although 2 would be ideal, LOL.
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Title: Exciting!
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 21:25 PST
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Oh, I can feel it! The end is near... I believe that Sesshoumaru will be most happy to go to battle against Asuza with the snow monkeys. But thats just my opinion. As for Kagome... OBVIOUSLY she's going to see Sesshoumaru soon, but the question is, will he tell her then? Or will he wait again? I just hope he's nice to Shippou. ShippouRin is so cute, and I would hate for it to be over before it was started. ^_^ You have eloquent, lovely writing, Rin-chan. By now, I know you won't let us down with the ending. What has my interest piqued at this point is, Will you write another? Are you going to take on another huge SessKag? I sure hope so, especially if it's as engaging as VoH.
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Title: Woohoo!
Reviewed By: Tiegrsi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 20:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More 10's all around! I am SO happy to see another new chapter! LOL, I have been checking back every day for almost a week, knowing that it's been awhile and you would probably update soon. And WOW, what a lemon! not only did it include the 16 wives, but the personal guard, as well! Congratulations on that one! My goodness. I am also happy to see that Uchuu is going to find out just who the other prisoner was. I'm willing to bet that Sesshomaru would rather ally himself with the monkeys than have word spread of his...confinement. Then again, I also immagine he will not be too happy to have Uchuu find out just who he is! I am glad Kagome has her sight back now, too. I am looking forward to what might happen when next she spies the great Western Lord. Though I'm sure she still will not put 2 and 2 together until she hears him grunt or something. Or is it possible she might recognise his aura if he gets physically close enough to her? I also hope Rin and Shippo can work things out well! I really like the young love between them! It's very sweet. :) I guess I am a bit long-winded today. Thank you for brightening my day :)
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe (nsi) On: January 09, 2008 10:54 PST
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Man that was something else. I am glad Taikimaru got to get his release too. New rule you can jack off while watching!
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Title: No you didn't!
Reviewed By: Kagome357 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 03:31 PST
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Dang...the King is a freak!! That was wild to say the least. I wasn't sure if you could pull it off and I gotta say that was one raunchy orgy so nice job. I'm glad Kagome got her sight back. Is she and Shippo going to journey to the Western Citadel and get there the same time Uchuu gets there? That'll be an interesting read. This is a very complex and layered story and I'm glad to see that you're creating a masterpiece and not abandoning it, as I've seen other writers not being able to handle the magnitude of a huge project such as this. You're doing an excellent job.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 22:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really nice chapter and provided me with more laughs than I have had all day! I especially liked the like about how the monkey king didn't know how to stay out of his brother's affairs. I'm really glad that Kagome's sight is completely back and I am really curious about how the next meeting between Kagome, Shippo and Sesshoumaru will go or whatever combination of the three that includes Sesshoumaru. I thought that the lemon was done really well. It was not something I was really in the mood for today, but I found that it answered a lot of idle questions that occurred to me when I first read about the harem. I wish you had written more that contributed to the story itself than such a long lemon, but I see that it was a sort of a challenge for you to do that and I can totally forgive it for that fact that you said you will have a new chapter out soon which I am just ITCHING to read... almost as bad as that guard, but not the same way lol! Maybe that guard will remember to bring a handkerchief with him if he ever makes another mess in the royal chambers or whatever it's called... but I kind of doubt that will happen... So, I hope that you really do get that next chapter up soon!
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Reviewed By: blunt On: January 08, 2008 21:18 PST
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I really love this story, but I hated the fact that you wasted 75 percent of the chapter on a needless lemon. I feel like the final battle could have been written some many chapters ago.It's well written but you are starting to put in unnecessary anecdotes. Can you stick to the main plot please?
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Reviewed By: whimsy007 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 19:42 PST
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Not canon and not "continuation". The characterizations appear to be based on fanon rather than on the manga (or even on the anime which isn't canon either). It should be classified as "divergence" or "other".
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 22:17 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love reading your works. They flow like water in a stream. . . smooth yet with dips and rapid turns! Very nice, you give beautiful desriptions and all in all your fics all make for very good reads. Please do keep it up for us.
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Title: My Boy Needs Counseling
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 17:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Poor Sesshomaru. Now I get what the seer was saying. Kagome of course has no idea, and what's it gonna take to get them together. I love the Monkey Prince so much. He cracks me up. I simply cannot wait for the next installment. You now have my spine in your hands. Peace!
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 13:34 PST
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I can't wait for the next chapter, even though that sounds really perverted. XD No, what I really want is to find out how Sesshy tells Kags that it was him all along. This is really great! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 16:18 PST
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May I just say that your last author's note made me laugh. We can only hope that Hyuuga has the stamina required. *snicker* This was a great chapter and you are really setting us up for some major drama. I'm glad for it. I probably would have done the same, letting Sesshoumaru get carried away and having Kagome say awful things to him. I'm glad she doesn't blame him now, though. And Shippou and Rin make such a cute couple!!! I was hoping to see a bit more of Shin, though - but not in his perverted way. So, Nobunaga has not forgotten our lovely miko? He has no idea what he's getting himself into. And poor Kagome! She doesn't know the situation she's in! I'm wondering, though - doesn't Kagome realize, with all the clues, and how her youkai sent for her exact friends, who he is? There couldn't be many demons that she's met that would know so much about her. But I'm glad for Kagome's ignorance. It makes for a better story. I actually am writing something similar, but the other way around: it's Sesshoumaru that has the handicap. Anywho, great job. And if you don't update soon, Happy Holidays and Happy New Year!
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Reviewed By: hakutou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 01:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of, if not the best fic I've ever read. I absolutely love the plot and each of the character's personalities (except Asuza of course *grin*). I've read a lot of Sess/Kag stories where she brings him back to himself after various circumstances but none as complex and awesome!!!! You've got me up all night reading this and held in supense and waiting for the next chapter. I can't wait to see Kagome's reaction when she finds out that her youkai is really Sesshoumaru. You are a fantastic writer and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! ~Hakutou~
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 20:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is such a great story. I love the way you drag out Kagome and Sesshoumaru getting together. I can barely stand the suspence! However, that's what makes a story great. Storys like this leave you on the edge of your seat wondering what will happen to our main characters next. There's so much detail, even in the scenes that you could have just let simple. For example, in the last chapter, in the last scene, you didn't have to give the men putting up the posters names. You didn't have to explain why Saya's uncle was having a bad night, but you did. It makes the scene much more compelling. I applaude you for your wonderful writing and hope with every ounce of energy that I will get a new chapter soon. Thank you for this story. It's so wonderfully dark and the extra story lines make it a rare find. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 13:42 PST
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*squeal* i can't wait for the next chapther! What's Sesshoumaru going to do next? Espically if she's taken by Nobunga! Can't wait! Can't wait!
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