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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 15:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ugh, Inuyasha's so INFURIATING. I mean, come on, you already have Saya, you nearly chose Kikyou - do you have to hold on to everything you have so tightly? Honestly. "If you love something, let it go; if it returns, it was meant to be." Gawd. I'm getting so pissed now. But, continuing on, I rather liked this chapter. Especially all the... discoveries. Very interesting. A few grammatical errors, but only freaks like me notice that, so whatever. Great job - update soon, yeah? Oh, as a side note, do you have an account on FFN? I really do enjoy reading your stories, but I rarely ever come on MMO, so I was wondering. It makes it so much easier if everything's in the same place. Of course, this isn't exactly FFN-appropriate... but your other stories, maybe?
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 15:12 PDT
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i cant wait for the next update! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 13:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha should turn back and find a safe place to hole up for awhile. At least until Kagome wakes up. Also, a place where Saya can be left in hiding. She's not trained to fight like the others. That red dust is the blood of that blond Aztec god so naturally it would have an effect on humans especially. Youkai are already a gifted race similar to the Aztec gods. I think immortality along with special talents were bestowed on the mortal humans from his blood when they breathed it in and absorbed it through their eyes and skin. Miroku is beginning to figure it out. He just hasn't figured it out completely. I can't wait til the humans learn they're immortal now. Am I right? The scene where Uchuu and Sesshoumaru went back and faced their nightmares was very emotional. They both needed to do that, especially Sesshoumaru. He suffered an additional humiliation that Uchuu did not. I so want Sesshoumaru and Kagome alongside each other. Whatever has to be done to defeat Iku and Nobunaga, let them do it together. Inuyasha, the butt-head, will just have to "take a powder" and not try to make decisions for her.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 19:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooo end of chapter!!!!1 It so good too!!!!!11
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 18:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing chapter as always. I think I was on to something there with the red dust being connected to their spiritual powers, but maybe that was obvious. I can be so dense at times. *blush* I really pity Sesshoumaru who never gets to be alone with Kagome. But their moment will come, no doubt. And I'm looking forward to it! :D
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 17:11 PDT
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I feel so bad for Chisumi....Was she the one that Banchi was refering to? or is there still trubble ahead that may cause Kagome her life! I can't believe that Kagome and Sesshoumaru still can't be together.........I hope that Sesshoumaru doesn't fall into Iku's trap and let Kagome be captured that would be trubbling.......Oh Ya I'm Soooooooooooo Happy that Sesshoumaru got he fluffy and his sword back that was funny how the sword tried to heal his emotional pain...hehe....and Uchuu got his tail back that's nice....I hope all goes well in the next chapter and I'll be wait for that update....XD............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: imoshen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 13:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After I've read this chapter... I can't wait for the next. Awesome - as always. I was happy to see Iku again even if I hate his character ;) But I wondered what he's up to after Azusas death, now I know. I'm also a big Uchuu fan and yay, he has his tail back :-) After the last time you've updated I read your other work at 'A single Spark' and here on Mediaminer and must say that you're one of my favorite authors. I wish I could say/write more. I hope you keep your good work up ;)
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 11:28 PDT
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Oh wow! Everyone knows that Sesshoumaru wants Kagome, but have no idea why. That has me wondering what will happen in order for Sesshoumaru to take Kagome without there being a huge battle. Will Sesshoumaru's secret be revealed? Will Miroku's new ability aid them? Please don't try to answer. I want the suspense! Poor Chisume! I can't believe that she wasn't saved. She was pivotal in the release of the prisoners. How terrible! And, why couldn't Sesshoumaru save the dead monkeys? The trip to the dungeon was creepy, but I'm glad that Uchuu was able to reconnect his tail. That was nice. Oooh! I loved the battle, even though it was over so fast for this action whore. Thanks for putting so much effort into it! Much appreciated! Too bad Kouga didn't get in more fighting. He might act like an egotistical jerk, but he only does it to tease Inuyasha. That's in the manga. Oh! I'm so anxious to learn what happened with the mortals! I can't believe that Sess had to leave Kagome behind. Gah! And that Iku bastard is still around. I see so many possibilities running around in my head. Will he try to humiliate Inuyasha in Sesshoumaru's place? Will he be the one to give away Sesshoumaru's secret? What will happen at the village? So many things to keep the suspense going! I definitely love your style and am so glad that the writing is so readable. Kudos to you and your beta. Thanks again! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 10:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
iku has a better chace killing sessh. ~sessh- he'd die either way. my way is less painful. ~kagome- oh... yea. just melt him into a puddle of sludge. ~sessh- smirk* u cant find better quality. ~tba- chhh. i would rather kill him by tieing him to a metal blaord. and stick swords into him. more and more everyday. watching him suffer. no food. no water. just pain. *laughs evilly* AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!! ~sessh+kags- ... ~tba- wat? ~sessh- .......... thats just wrong. ~tba- so? u suffered. and i cant let anybody hurt my sesshy-kins. and my friend kagome. ~kagome- SO U DO HAVE A HEART! ~tba- uh... the matter is debatable but i guess.. ~sessh- great. u have a heart. and u still have so many mood swings. its like ur pregnet but ur not. ~tba- that... wasnt funny. ~sessh- the truth can or cannot b funny demon-miko. ~kags- yep! she's pure. yet un-pure. ~both- she's one of a kind and darker than black. ~TBA- thats cause im theblackangel. besides. u cant find anything like me. ~sessh- not like we would want another crazed emotional tomboy tenager with no common sense. ~tba- pulls sesshs ear* wat was that! ~sessh- OWW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW! DONT PULL IT! ITS ALREADY VERY LONG! OW OW OW OW OW!! STOP ! PLEASE! ~tba- releases sessh* good boy. well... update soon! bye! ~sessh- rubbs ear* that girl's got some grip. ~kagome- yeah. *holds out something wrapped in a blanket* here u go! ~sessh- hm... ah! its finnally here! now tba will perish!!!!!! mwahahahahhahahahaha! ~tba- looks at kags+sessh- uh... did u guyz say something? ~both- uh... no... ~tba- turns back around* OK! SEEE YA! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 10:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sad that Sesshoumaru isn't going to use his sword to save Chisumi's life! I thought he would just like he had on Rin. I wish the story wasn't coming to an end - I love it so much! I hope you'll start writing another Kag/Sess story soon afterwards!
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Title: Outstanding!
Reviewed By: Kagome357 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 10:10 PDT
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You know, I have this thing to where if a story is going past a certain amount of chapters, I figure the writer doesn't have a clue as to where the story's going so I get bored and drop the story. You could take this up to well past 100 chapters and I'd never get tired of reading it. Here's something I normally don't say to a writer - please consider a sequel. This is one of the finest stories I've ever read and only because I want to see Sesshomaru and Kagome as well as Inuyasha and Saya hooked up do I can even foresee an ending to it. Good luck with the Single Spark Awards and congrats. The scene between Sess and Kagome as she was touching his face and him surrendering to her was so beautiful, as well as Inuyasha and Saya. The Inu Brothers have found love and it's so passionate and beautiful. Now we focus on the baddies with Chickenboy and Nobunaga. I can't say it enough thank you and Risa for this wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 04:56 PDT
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poor kagome. i'm curious as to her new growth of power. was it really the red dust? hm...neway, i enjoyed this chapter and can't wait for more. ;D FL
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Reviewed By: west On: March 29, 2008 00:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, go you. You are awsome at updating. i check everyday for an update an just by chance i checked a second time today and low and behold there was another chapter. I can't wait to see more, but damn i really want sess and kag to get some time together. all in good time i guess. Well, keep up the good work and might i just add that said work is addicting. Untill next time... ^_^
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 22:39 PDT
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ahhhh. The new mystery of what the Red Dust has done to the humans is now amongst us. It'll be interesting to see if Sango's change comes out when she enters combat. Since duress is when most changes, for good or ill are most noticable. Blood of a god though. And they inhaled it, quite possible that it has enhanced them all in some way, shape or form? I'll be looking forward to seeing how this turns out. You have once again gained my attention and my accolades for another finely written chapter. DD
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-coolness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 16:20 PDT
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zomg. wen r u updating.
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