| "Violation of Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 497 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kirie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 23:37 PST
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This story really sucks you in. You want to look away from all the horror you put these poor characters through... but you just can't! Poor Kagome, now blind and rather helpless (nothing compared to our Lord Sesshoumaru but still...)! Please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 09:20 PST
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I want chapter 7!!!! Is it currently at the beta's? Or do like to torture us?
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 08:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, oh! Po' Kagome... she just can't win for losing. Can't wait for chapter 8 but the plot has had me pulled in for a while and I can wait just to see how the next unfolds. Awesome job, as always. Can't wait to see the next update.
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 01:21 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah exceltely exicuted cliff hanger. I give it a ten, and hurry up and save us before we fall to our most painful deaths.
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Title: omfg WOOT!
Reviewed By: nyoku111 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 01:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sob* I love you. 0.0 *sob* Your fanfics always leave me on the end of my seat. I can't wait until the next chapter and the one after that and so on. *bows* You had me as an avid fan with Tortured Love >.< *throws bloody rose petals everywhere* Wooh that was my first dark hentai-like fanfic I almost died but I loved in a way that I could never describe with words. *blissful sigh* Ever since then I have been hooked to your works. I appreciate and treasure your fics Rinseternalsoul. Romance / Action / Hentai / Drama / Angst all the genres I love are spun beautifully into these fics and my emotions go topsy turvy (in the most intense and awesome ways) *wink* xD SO yeah (lol) This fic is freakin awesome!! My eyes dearly withered up and fell out my head...I cried so much over Sesshoumaru!>.< now Kagome's blind OMG that is one of my worst fears >lack of sight< she took it pretty well xD I can't wait until Kagome meets Sesshou... The Emotion! The Drama! The Smut! :O WOot I can only imagine for now >.< So please continue I can't seem to get enough. :D
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Title: Dear GOD!
Reviewed By: Chaos-and-Serenity [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 21:30 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Firstly, I nearly died when she told Oda to get some rest and drink plenty of fluids! Poor Kagome. Though she can't see it yet, she has caught a break or two, unlike Sesshoumaru. She may be poor, but he's suffering from abject poverty! I was laughing and cursing this whole chapter! Rational emotional escapade = damn good writing. Did that even make sense? You see - you've turned me into a blabbering fool! Thanks for that! ;) God, I sound like Christmas is tomorrow... I'm so impressed by the realism of this story, and despite the angsty premise, it's a remarkably well-rounded fic and a flat-out good read. Fantastic job, my dear, and I can't wait for more! I swear I always say that. Hell, this story's like a drug, what do you expect me to say?
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Title: Aw man.
Reviewed By: ChobitsXDarkFreya [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 20:05 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found out you updated, I used to check Mediaminer every day but after a while I gave up on that so I'm going to check up every week or so instead. The chapter you wrote is long and great! I'm just a little depressed that there wasn't anything about Sesshomaru in it though, I'm not that fond of Kagome or Shippo. But I know this is sort of the foundation for your story and I'm 100% sure that your later chapters will become more and more amazing! I hope your next chapter has something about Sessho and Uchuu. The story has been around Sesshomaru and the evil witch for a while so I forgot that Kagome had to come into the story at some point. I really hope you update soon!! Merry Early Christmas by the way! I hope you have a long winter vacation of some sort so you can write 2-3 more chapters before the new year comes around. Thanks for writing! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 09:20 PST
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I am very much enjoying this piece. The elements of history that you are throwing in are interesting. You commented in the last chapter posted that you had gotten some comments about the severity of the torture that Sess is going through. I wanted to let you know that I don't think that you are going too far. There is a fine line between darkness for darkness sake and darkness for art's sake. I think that you are doing a fine job balancing. It is always darkest before the light comes, so the darkness in his dungeon and 'torture chapber' seem approptiate to me. There have been a few fics in the past that had Sess as a slave of some sort and his reaction to it. In these, the little that the author gave the reader in the way of background doesn't seem to be appropriate to his response. I think that by the time that Kagome starts to heal Sess's heart and mind that the reader will really understand the difficulty in that healing. I look forward to reading that psychological nugget. I also enjoyed the humanization of Sess. In the early chapters he refuses the drugged water - causing the flogging of his server, but then in later ones he tries to keep her from getting the same treatment when the snow monkey youkai comes in. It shows a leap in his compassion. it seems that he will be in a great need of it when he is finally 'released'/'saved'/whatever so that he doesn't turn on those around him. I also understand that in order for Sess to be able to truly fall in love with a human he has to go through some fundimental changes. Speaking of compassion and those who don't have any - your antagonist is an interesting daemoness. I like that you have given her a back history so that she isn't just crazy and sadistic for the sake of sadism. While it isn't an excuse, she does have a reason for her cruelty. I look forward to future chapters. Thanks for sharing with us.
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: December 18, 2006 12:59 PST
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*GASP* oh goodie!! kagome and her big mouth geez. We'll im very excited for the next chapter and the harsh relaties of the real past and can't wait! till then
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 12:35 PST
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Looking forward to some more dark chapters for Sessho, will the N/C Yaoi happen? I was bit sad that Sessho tried to kill himself before he was raped. Yaoi with Sessho seems to have him in the dominate position it is high time he is dominated and taken off his high horse. Before anyone asks I love Sessho very much.
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Reviewed By: emeraldoni [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 11:16 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to update soon! You have amazing writing skills and I am absolutely drawn into this. Poor Sesshoumaru, I feel so sorry for him, but he musst sacrifice himsefl to give this plot sustenance, so Im sure hes not as wrathful as he could be. Maybe... Anyway, I just wanted to say you have amazing writing skills and such and that I cant wait for the next chapter. Im sitting on the edge of my seat for when Kagome and Sesshoumaru actually meet. I cant wait!
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Reviewed By: Chaos-and-Serenity [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 09:24 PST
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This is getting even more exciting! Poor Kagome, though, I hope she can stay out of trouble... Then again, if she heals him, then she might be given some preferential treatment - well, as far as no mutilation and such (it doesn't do to torture your healer). Another glorious dimension has been added to this story and I can't wait to read what your imagination has in store for us. This fic is my favorite - the only I've actually paused my day to read. Maybe I'm just demented, but I'm actually looking foward to it getting worse for our heroes (lol)! To me, things like that make a story like this all the more powerful. God, I love this story! *Bows in awe of some serious talent* Thanks, hon, and good luck with the upcoming chapters! But you seem so organized with this one that I doubt you need it! ~Much love, Chaos
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Reviewed By: Tana-san On: December 18, 2006 02:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Rin Girl. I'm a fan of yours on A Single Spark and AFF. Just happened to catch AFF on downtime and found this here. Rin, you have got to be the most twisted and perverted writer I know when it comes to sex scenes. Don't take that as a bad thing, cause your love scenes leave a gal only wishing a cold shower could help dull the ache. Your talent astounds me. Yes, you are the queen of smut as I've heard you called on many a story review. You really should be a writer making money for the great work you put out. If you ever do publish something I do so hope you'll let us know. You've got quite the following in fanfiction. This story has got to be the most dramatic one you've written. I'm crying and cringing for poor Sesshoumaru and the lil water girl too. I know you though. Death ensues for those involved in this torture filled fic who dared to hurt and demean our Taiyoukai. You have never once failed to entice us with a good intro without giving us a good ending,so I am watching to see this to completion. Go,RinRin, you've got me hooked.
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Title: Ch. 5
Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 20:38 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, nice chapter. Loved the descriptions, as usual, and I can't wait to see how the next unfolds and I know that in the end, we'll TRULY enjoy it. *wink* Bravo, as always... keep up the good work and can't wait to see another update soon. :D
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Reviewed By: ChobitsXDarkFreya [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 16:00 PST
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Please update! Oh man, I keep on checking your story for the next chapter but the latest one is still Uchuu the Snow Monkey! Wha! T__T
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