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Reviewed By: kirr1001 On: May 05, 2012 12:25 EDT
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As I read this trought, the whole time I was thinking "Was gotten into Kagome??? She's clearly not herself! ... Or is she...?" When I started reading the end, my mouth turned up into huge smile :D You really got me there, what a surprise! |
Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2011 22:35 EDT
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Your update of your older stories proves to me that even back then you were amazing. Once again, your story was fantastic. |
Reviewed By: SakuraRyuu On: August 04, 2011 16:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I remember reading this a long time ago, but I didn't realize it was yours. I still really enjoyed it. :) |
Title: Thought I should log in to review
Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2011 13:13 EDT
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Wowzers! This was a little hard to get through at times. I was actually mortified that Kagome had suddenly developed a split personality and was physically hurting her hanyou. I truly felt relief when she threw that crop away. Only to have the added twist at the end of 'bedroom role-play'. Perfectly plotted my dear! The ending made the whole thing playful and endearing. Kagome likely had a really tough time taking on the 'mistress' role as she detests Inuyasha being hurt. Good thing for youkai healing abilities. Only a caring and passionate couple could pull this off with niether one feeling hurt afterwards. |
Reviewed By: Kodiaq. Kitty On: April 10, 2011 13:10 EDT
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Wowzers! This was a little hard to get through at times. I was actually mortified that Kagome had suddenly developed a split personality and was physically hurting her hanyou. I truly felt relief when she threw that crop away. Only to have the added twist at the end of 'bedroom role-play'. Perfectly plotted my dear! The ending made the whole thing playful and endearing. Kagome likely had a really tough time taking on the 'mistress' role as she detests Inuyasha being hurt. Good thing for youkai healing abilities. Only a caring and passionate couple could pull this off with niether one feeling hurt afterwards. |
Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2010 18:43 EDT
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THAT WAS EPICCCC
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Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2010 22:15 EDT
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Well that was different. I don't usually read this type of story but since I liked all of your others I decided to give it a try. Had me fooled until the end when they revealed it was role-playing. Until that point I thought you had gone really out of character when usually you get the characters dead on. Nice work.
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Reviewed By: LADY SILVERFOX AKA MYCHELLE 79 On: December 17, 2009 14:31 EST
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good story please write more please!!! u know she could of handcuffed him 2 her bed but oh well. oh god she gotta tell sango!!!! maybe sango could do something like this 2 miroku!!! think about it wouldn't it b funny 2 see sango doing something like that 2 miroku?
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Reviewed By: Ancient Spirit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2009 07:35 EDT
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totally sexy and kinky. LOVE IT.
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Reviewed By: johneotaku4life [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 21:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was AWESOME! I love the way that it ended. Perfect. Makes me want more. Yumm Yumm! So Inuyahsa likes to be dominated huh...
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Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2008 08:39 EDT
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boy, that's another face of kagome you showed us. i really, really like your style!
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Reviewed By: Sumisung [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 18:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was an unexpectedly great short story. I am very pleased that I stumbled upon it. I love how the story turned out to be a fantasy played out between a mated Inuyasha and Kagome. At first I thought 'Ok so Kagome has either got a part in a play or she is dressing up for some sort of costume party', but when she travels through the well and starts picking on Inuyasha my thoughts immediately changed to 'Oh my god! Kagome has finally snapped, not in a good way either and defiantly not in a way which I would have expected.' I was rather shocked at first due to the new dominatrix type Kagome, but then again I think Inuyasha was as well. It was interesting to see the conflict Inuyasha was going through with regards to what his Inu yokai instincts were telling him, his cognitive and conscious thoughts and his body's own natural reactions to the whole situation. The whole pleasure verses pain scenario is always fun to see and it fitted in very well this particular story. The emotions were portrayed very well and helped to bring the story to life. I was a little bit sad though, that Inuyasha seamed to give in a little too easily and conceive in the end, becoming the submissive puppy that Kagome wanted. This is due to the fact that Inuyasha is rather proud and extremely stubborn, I was thinking as I continued to read that he could distract himself. My mental though was 'I'm sure that if you really wants to, you could bite your tongue or something, to distract your self from Kagome's ministrations, so do something already, don't give up Inuyasha.' But on the other hand I was also secretly cheering Kagome on, but only a little bit. Your story kept me captivated right through till the end and I must say the last little part was a total surprise. The little extra bit at the end, which reveals that it was all a little role-play fantasy between them and that they were mated brought a smile to my face and warmed my heart. It was the last thing that I had expected and it was a truly pleasant surprise. All in all I found this story surprising and a pleasure to read. So please keep up the fabulous work and I look forward to reading more of you work in the near future. All the best Sumisung
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Reviewed By: Kurinju-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 19:00 EDT
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Hahahaha!!! That was a fantastic angle for a story! I've never read one like that before. Wonderfully done! Wonderfully written! Amazing. Great lemon. I'm really starting to like your style...
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 02:09 EST
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one of the best pieces of smut out there!
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Reviewed By: Hotaru no Aimori (Firefly of the forest of love On: January 11, 2008 14:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
while reading this i recently experienced laughing and crying at the same time. splendent...you've done this to me too many times!
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