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| "A River in Egypt" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Sarah Serena Rose On: February 04, 2012 09:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this, even though it was short, you still expressed the emotions in a really great way. | Title: My thoughts
Reviewed By: Pastel Mina [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 23:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
My rating is because while this fic was really good the vagueness can get annoying. Yes it leaves things unsaid and interesting but in this story it gets old in some parts really quickly. I really enjoyed this story. It had a sweet sad angst to it. It's sad that Danny and her aren't together and the tough goth girl is left out in the cold by the boy who just doesn't (seem to) need her. Great job. You really know how to make emotions flow from the page and you're good at imagery too.
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