| Title: Nice Start|
Reviewed By: BlackLotus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 18:12 CST
Style of Writing: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Good start to the story! Modernizing it was good, I like it so far. Even if you don't go far with this,I'd like to read another chapter or two. Keep it up, I always like your stories.