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"Sensei no Seito" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: me  On: March 20, 2007 15:39 CDT
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i think you should go with the traditional threesome =3 it always works^^ and they just fit... like 1x2x5 is hawt XP but now im on a tangent!
 Reviewed By: GilShalos [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 05, 2006 08:15 CST
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Overall Rating: 9 of 10
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Interesting concept and nicely written. I've always enjoyed seeing someone write Childman in character since he is very enigmatic (plus speaking as a writer, he's very difficult.) You might want to mark this slightly AU from the Anime because Hartia at the end specifically states Childman's intentions and implied feelings towards Azalie. Or simply explain his actions in the end later in your story. Just a suggestion... Have a great day! Gil

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