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 | "Orion" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |  | Reviewed By: MazeSpeed [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 22, 2012 20:20 EDT Comment/Review:
 I love this story please update!
 |  | Title: A good start Reviewed By: tubaotaku18 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 11, 2007 14:55 EDT
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 Style of Writing: 8 of 10Comment/Review:Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
 You have a very good storyline going so far. Your grammar and organization need a little work, but you've got a good imagination to keep your story going. You might also want to expand situations and limit POV shifts slightly. I look forward to reading more of this story when you continue it.
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