| Reviewed By: Fluffy of the SKT [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 12:35 CDT|
Style of Writing: 8 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Alright, I just have to say that, though I enjoyed the fanfic, I thought that the beginning was a bit slow. I understand your reasoning; perhaps you were trying to set a base for their relationship, but it did seem a bit...well, as I said before, slow. I liked the fact that you mimicked the personalities of the original characters pretty well, and I laughed at Ryoma's father and Eiji's urge to shake out whatever was wrong with Echizen. It was an original order of events; even if I found it a bit spacey at times, I found it interesting. Merci et bonne chance.