| Reviewed By: shinobi168 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 17:56 CST|
Style of Writing: 7 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Your spelling was pretty good, some minor mistakes. Your style of writing can't really be rated, but I gave it a 7 because I'm... Well, I'm just picky. A note; you don't ahve to use proper spelling when you write dialogue. The oroginality was pretty good, especially to me, mainly because I haven't seen the Outlaw Star series. The enjoyment, same reason. Overall, it was pretty good.