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| "Faded" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: desmond1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2010 08:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I haven't read this story in such a long time (since 2003 actually) and almost forgot how amazing it was! All the lies and secrets...I just love it. It's like DBZ meets Lifetime. I felt so sorry for poor Marron, it was like the whole world had turned against her. But at least she still had Yamucha. ^_^ It's a shame that you weren't able to finish it, especially when Marron's letter was reaching its climax. But as a writer myself, I understand that many things can come up and stop a story from being completed. I just wanted to thank you for creating such a great story. Seven years later and it's still one of my favorite M/Y stories. Thanks again! ^_^
| Reviewed By: lmv17brat On: March 23, 2003 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! you are a great writer and I am a very supportive fan of Marron and Yamcha. they are the most romantic couple of DBZ since Bulma and Vegeta! You did a great job with the writing and spelling, your creativity is beyond excellent and you are the most talented of all the DBZ writers. WONDERFUL!!!!!!!! | Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 02:41 CST
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*looks around franticly for the button for the next chapter* Hello! *knocks on screen* Where is it?!? Where is the next chapter?!? I'm dying over here!!! I NEED the next part of the story!!!
This story was totally great. It took me almost a week to get this far, but it was worth it. The story is so sexy and poor Yamcha didn't stand a chance against Marron.
I totally love how you fit Sharpener into the story. Thing is, it was totally believeable. (damn, i can't spell *sigh*)
Oh, the elevator, very sexy place to get it on. ^_^ Definately unusualy.
Poor Yamcha. The debate he was having, wrestling with his emotions. He felt so bad...I cant' help but feel very sorry for him. Then again, were I Marron, I would have wanted the same thing from him. ^_^
Okay, I really don't know what else to say since it's almost three a.m. and I'm starting to get slightly sleepy. So I'll leave you with these final thoughts. 1) Great story and 2) update SOON or I'll pester the hell outta ya. That's all. ^_^ Until the inevitable day when you do update, Peace and Out. | Reviewed By: Salsa Kitty (Salsa_Kitty_18@yahoo.com) On: November 26, 2002 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing... just plain amazing... An odd coupling, but hell... I love odd couples! I hardly very read Yamacha fics but this one was deffinitly a joy! It was wonderfully written, great spelling and grammar (which is always a plus ^.^). To find out that it was Marron that was Yamacha's love intrest was quite surprising, I would have never have guessed, and the story was just over all very good. Great Lemon scenes ^.^ some of the best I've read! Please update this soon... I wanna know... Where's Marron? Will she come back to him? I have'ta know!!!
Salsa Kitty ^.^ | Reviewed By: Stacy Small On: November 26, 2002 09:25 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read a recomendation for this and I want to say I'm glad I did I hope you plan on writing more Stacy Small tdfct@yahoo.com | Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2002 08:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe you don't have more reviews than measly little me with this totally phenomenal story!! I'll go ahead and admit that I was in a sleasy mood and skimming through the sleasy stories one night when i happened upon the summary to this fic. I'm a sucker for the "underdog" characters... especially in DBZ. As you can tell from my name, I totally idolize Piccolo, who is one of the more overlooked characters of the anime despite the fact that he's the creator's favorite. And lately that liking for overlooked characters has spread to all the others... Krillin, Tien, and yes... Yamcha. So when I saw the summary to this fic, it was like a red light in my head. I picked it back up tonight (or morning depending on how you look at it) due to forced insomnia. Needless to say, this fic was at the top of my "To Read" list. ^^v
You totally blew me away with the Prologue. Out of all the girls in the DB world, (and I had assumed beforehand that you had created one of your own) I was, to say the least, shocked to find that Marron was our female lead. But, being a fan of unlikely and rare couples, I was intrigued. So for hours, I sat in my uncomfortable swivel chair, staring at an illuminated monitor, reading this glorious piece of imagination and art. It could very well be the best fanfiction I've read. And believe me, I've been reading long enough to know the good ones when I see them. You have a genuine talent for writing. I felt like I was reading a professional's work. (And I'm only assuming that a professional wouldn't waste talent on something such as this that is impossible to collect money from.) And to compliment you further, (I'm hoping) I usually shy away from fics that take place in or after GT. But you really drew me in with this. And you didn't have to even watch Dragonball (not really) to get the amazing feel from this fic. You wrote it in a way that reminded us how deep these characters have a potential to be in desperate situations. We rarely see that side of them. On another tip, (just be patient, I'm almost finished) it wasn't a fic that absolutely needed action, as in tons and tons of fighting. You pegged the character's emotions so well that it had that genuine realistic feeling that most fics tend to neglect. So, in closing (yes, I know you're relieved that I'm finally shutting up) this is a truly quite the amazing epic you have here. It's definitely going on my favorites list. The tens on this scale doesn't compare to what I would personally rate this fic. I can't wait to read more of it. Keep up the great work!! |
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