| Title: Very Cool|
Reviewed By: BlackLotus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 22:53 CST
Style of Writing: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Oooh I liked this short piece. It's so fitting, because there's the side of the brain that doesn't want those two together, but there is the other side that screams they should be together. This was a nice in-between. And isn't that the way it happens with someone you're attracted, to? You did an awesome job on this short! The best one yet. The last line seemed a bit off, it didn't quite flow with the rest of the short, but I still loved it!